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Reviews for Always By Your Side

LadySeverus	2010.01.22 - 04:58PM	22: XXII: Reflections	Signed
Urgh. What's with the ring? I'm enjoying all the intrigue. We seems to get some things straightened out...Demeter meeting her father, Morgaine admitting to some of her feelings and then more things crop up. It's like the Whack-A-Mole game at the fair! I'll keep reading, even if I'm a bit slow at times but you know how RL is. Author's Response: Hey, that's a beautiful ring ;) There are more mysterious things and more trouble waiting for our Potions family, but I'll try to be nice. And I know indeed how RL is. Interfering with fan fic! How dare it! haha! Don't worry, I will be very glad when you read the next chapters, whenever that is. Have a great weekend.

memory	2010.01.22 - 05:33AM	22: XXII: Reflections	Signed
Finally the chapter is out! I wish I could write in Italian to explain better my thoughts. However. Two things have hit me: the first one is Snape declaring that he want to stay with his "family". Always. This can have a lot of interesting developments in his future (form of) life. But, much sweeter, it's the admission of need. He needs his family, the thing that keeps him linked to earth (my opinion, of course). The second thing, a bit more alarming. Demeter is not wearing her mother's gift for the night. This might be OK for the night, but will she wear it in the following days or will she forget, as it is too big for her to wear? Morgaine should reduced the size, perhaps. As always, I wait impatiently for more. Author's Response: Trust me, I am also very impatiently waiting for more. Curse Real Life to interfere with my fan fic writing! Severus has always been a protector. Now, he finally gets to protect someone who is important to him, his own flesh and blood. It is a new experience and potentially frightful. But Severus is Severus, he will do his best. Demeter is a good girl. She will wear the pendent she was given by her mother and Morgaine will certainly remind her of it. You should be worrying about the ring instead. (Scared yet?)