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| kittyperry | 2010.03.07 - 10:53AM | 8: Chapter Eight: Whispers Of the Ibis | Signed |
| Wow. Another amazing chapter. I can't wait to read more. Author's Response: Thank you !! In between the drudgery of domestic duties (ugh)- I'm hoping to spend most of today finishing up Chapter 9 to send to my darlin' beta !! Fingers crossed !! | |||
| Sev4ever | 2010.02.17 - 11:19PM | 8: Chapter Eight: Whispers Of the Ibis | Signed |
| I'm glad Sev woke up. Was he pooping all over those sheets? I feel bad for those two if he was. Yuck! The least Minerva could have done was change out of her cat form and help them! Author's Response: A body in such helplessness is in need of deep compassion - no matter how grotesque the cirumstances might be. Any skilled doctor or nurse will attest to that. As for Minerva, she has a very serious goal in mind and could not allow herself to be diverted - especially since she knew there were two skilled people to deal with his daily needs. Her skills are needed to accomplish other things.... | |||
| Stefunny82 | 2010.02.16 - 06:53PM | 8: Chapter Eight: Whispers Of the Ibis | Signed |
| Sorryit took so long for me to write this review. Life can get so hectic at times...I am so glad I was able to read it because this was excellent! I felt bad for Gareth. That has to be exhausting work to do day after day with no change in his patient. It has to be discouraging. But I really like the new character! She is much needed here and seems like a very interesting girl! OMG! He has finally awaken! I really hope the next chapter can be posted soon because this is getting so, so good! I'm interested to see how Severus reacts to his new found blindness. Author's Response: He has a very dark road ahead of him - and the journey will be neither easy nor brief - but each companion that joins him will bring him one step closer to his light. | |||
| The Gallant Gryffindor | 2010.02.14 - 01:00PM | 8: Chapter Eight: Whispers Of the Ibis | Signed |
| WOW...wow...this is sooooooo getting good (not that is wasn't before)I like Deylth...is she perhaps a love interest for the good prof? I could see her as someone to unmelt that heart of his. I am so excited that Sev is waking up! That is great and it will be wonderfult to see what will happen next. I also liked the cat being there too...I love animals and she really added to this scene. Author's Response: Minerva has a very strong magic to bring to the situation - both as a witch and in her cat form - after all, as we've just learned, cats hold some of the deepest forms of magic! | |||
| LChaim | 2010.02.10 - 12:50AM | 8: Chapter Eight: Whispers Of the Ibis | Signed |
| I'm so sorry...I know this review has been very long in coming! As always you far exceed my expectations! This was an absolute pleasure to read!
Gareth did wonderfully by himself caring for Severus but the poor man does need some help or soon he may be just as bad off as his patient! I am glad to see Delyth and I am certain that she is really goign to add to this wonderful story! I loved the cat being there! OH MY G-D!!!! I can not believe you left us here!!! lol That was an amazing! I can not wait to read more!!!! Author's Response: Teetering on the edge, are you? *author grins in satisfaction* Imagine how poor "Neirin" must feel at the moment, not to mention our Delyth !! What a world lies before her !! Needless to say, I was absolutely delighted to see your review -- thank you !! | |||
| rininjapan | 2010.02.07 - 04:19AM | 8: Chapter Eight: Whispers Of the Ibis | Signed |
| I don't know what to say. I have been completely blown away by your powerful writing style, your intense imagination, and your gift for being able to tug me along for the ride in a deep trance of awe and wonderment. Your characterizations and attention to detail are exceptional and completely believable.
The only two things that I find detract a little are the endless references to a Magick which has practices and words I am not so familiar with, and the renaming of my favorite Half-Blood Prince. (Names are the most old and simple yet the most sacred spells of all Magick.) However, this old Magick is still a very amazing world to explore, and I do very much understand why he needed to be renamed. I just do hope that all can return to normal and names can be returned to their rightful owners soon.
Finally, may I hazard a guess to our third comrade in arms? A certain blond-haired boy who has a potential yet to be seen, and a man's oath yet to be made before he can become a real wizard? Author's Response: I'm so pleased to have bewitched you with my story - and I do hope the references to the ancient magicks of the Celts and the Egyptians will intrigue you to do your own bit of google work !!! You are quite correct about the power of names, which is why we must keep our Neirin's name well-hidden for the moment, lest he be discovered before he is strong enough to fight. And that third comrade - we shall see, we shall see.... *smile* | |||
| zenobia | 2010.01.18 - 02:11AM | 8: Chapter Eight: Whispers Of the Ibis | Signed |
| beautiful written, they are all on a yourney for salvation. Author's Response: As are we all, in one way or another. Thank you for joining this particular journey !! | |||
| Snapesbeatrice | 2010.01.16 - 02:31AM | 8: Chapter Eight: Whispers Of the Ibis | Signed |
| I am continuing to read and admire this story. Your writing in the earlier chapters has a quality that reminds me of Paul Bowles.
I'm saving up reviews for the OWL House Cup, so won't write more for this chapter. :-) Suffice to say, I'm anxiously awaiting further chapters. Author's Response: You have piqued my interest to learn more about Paul Bowles - must google madly now !! I would be most honored to bring distinction to my House on OWL through the intercession of your kind reviews !!! Many smiles and blessings gentle reader !!! | |||
| Rose of the West | 2010.01.15 - 01:00AM | 8: Chapter Eight: Whispers Of the Ibis | Signed |
| Like the others, I keep thinking the cat is Minerva and what is she doing, scratching at his Dark Mark? I would have expected her to pool whatever knowledge she had with Gareth. Author's Response: The ways of cats, especially transfigured ones, are a mystery they guard closely, but we shall see..... | |||
| Trickie Woo | 2010.01.13 - 11:47PM | 8: Chapter Eight: Whispers Of the Ibis | Signed |
| For some reason this chapter seems even darker than the earlier part of the story. I guess it's the darkness before the dawn because the plot has been set up and is now advancing. The cat must be Minerva. Why didn't she transform herself back into her human form sooner so that Gareth could be reassured that she had not forgotten Severus? We know she hasn't, but he has been left to wonder and to wonder what will become of Severus if they have forgotten him. All my empathy and my sympathy was with Gareth in this chapter. I'm puzzled as to how Delyth Morgan fits in here, in some parts she is a dear friend, but I also catch hints that she is his granddaughter or even his great granddaughter. Author's Response: The ways of cats are most mysterious, aren't they? We'll see soon.... Thank you as always for wonderfully perceptive comments !! You always look for the deeper layers and I love that !! | |||
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