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LadySeverus 2009.11.19 - 11:10PM 3: Level 3 Signed
Okay, I'm hooked. And I like the bling that she picked out too!

Author's Response: Ooh, someone's hooked! This is nice for me. xx

Rose of the West 2009.11.19 - 08:37PM 4: Level 4 Signed
Well, we've learned some more about her...she's not some innocent. We also find that neither is particularly eager for the wedding to happen immediately. It's going to be too enjoyable for too many other people though, to be put off indefinitely.

Author's Response: Lol I know, I had some fun writing about Narcissa. That's going to continue in the next chapter as I want to exaggerate it a bit. Hope you keep reading :) xxx

Rose of the West 2009.11.19 - 12:28PM 3: Level 3 Signed
I like the picture of her that's emerging, not quite grown up yet, but a lot more grown up than she should have to be.

Author's Response: I hope she comes across as quite mature. I've had some positive comments about her as a character; I'm really pleased she's likeable. x

Author's Response: Er, looking back over my reviews, those positive comments are all from you lol. But still, I'm glad you like her! x

Rose of the West 2009.11.17 - 12:19PM 2: Level 2 Signed
She sounds pretty interesting from the description we got of her in this chapter. I like that she's quickly realizing the reality will be nothing like her daydreams. She was cute to ask for a ring. I wonder if we will discover whether there's something hidden that really motivated him to make that offer?

Author's Response: I would say wait and see but I hate to assume you're going to carry on reading... but please do! I'm trying to make her likeable so thank you for saying that :) I hope she comes across as realistic.

Rose of the West 2009.11.14 - 09:58PM 1: Level 1 Signed
This looks like it could be good! I'm not a great fan of teacher/student, but I guess she's definitely of age, she's almost done at Hogwarts and maybe she doesn't take Potions any more?

Author's Response: Oh, if she had any sense she wouldn't take Potions, she knows she's rubbish at science. Hope you carry on reading, she won't be a student for too long :) thank you for your review!

Carrot top 2009.11.14 - 02:54PM 1: Level 1 Signed
Oooh interesting beginning, i always like stories where Voldermort wins for a change, lol.

Author's Response: Me too! I think I'd have liked the books to end that way tbh, lol. Would have made for much more interesting reading!

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