Reviews for The Sexual Initiation of Severus Snape
| Melpomene Erato |
2004.04.13 - 12:20AM |
4: Well, Let's Try Again |
Signed |
| "I felt the blood draining from my face as I stared up into his cold,
glittering bback eyes." It should say "black", not "bback". How on earth am I supposed to get any sleep tonight?! This really has me enthralled. |
| Persephone |
2004.04.09 - 07:59PM |
3: The Subtle Science and Exact Art of Sexuality |
Anonymous |
| A man with a big nose... Sounds hot. That ladies is why we love Severus |
| Persephone |
2004.04.09 - 07:53PM |
3: The Subtle Science and Exact Art of Sexuality |
Anonymous |
| A man with a big nose... Sounds hot. That ladies is why we love Severus |
| wishes2c |
2004.04.08 - 09:44AM |
1: A Pale Youth Appears at the Door |
Anonymous |
| This is wonderful! I love this story and I love your writing. And the choice of pseudonyms is exactly within character. Brilliant! More. please! |
| Synchestra Duende (aka Madelynx) |
2004.04.08 - 03:06AM |
3: The Subtle Science and Exact Art of Sexuality |
Anonymous |
My favorite parts here were Snape went to take care of her other client that had just shown up at the door. I like how we were left guessing along side this prostitute what exactly he did to her customer to persuade him elsewhere. I just like the absurdness of how vague it was and she listened in from her bedroom and then she sees him stride back with her other client's wine bottle in hand. Heh. Funny. I, too, also love the many uses of Snape's signature nose prowess and the many things he can do with it while pleasing a woman in the bedroom. Must say, in contrast to the first chapter, Snape seems much more like his older confident self (ala LLPL) and less an inexperienced teen. Perhaps it's just that he's directing his sexual education rather then letting the experienced woman be in the drivers seat. Sort of a different spin on Mrs. Robinson, no? How about some sexual explorations why they both look on in a mirror?
Author's Response: The turning point is meant to be when she makes the mistake of belitting him, with her remark to Tony over the phone. Although he obviously found her pity repugnant, it was the knowledge that she was not only humiliating him, but that she would probably talk about it to others that pushed him over the edge. Up until that time, he was still going to take the potion, but only to ensure that he would be able to perform and not leave the flat still a virgin. Once she cracked that joke, he became more determined to prolong the encounter and prove his dominance over her.
Author's Response: Oh, and as for the mirror, I swear I already had it planned, ;-). |
| Melpomene Erato |
2004.04.07 - 05:19PM |
3: The Subtle Science and Exact Art of Sexuality |
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| "Why had I thought his nose was too big? Sweet Jesus, it was a
wonderful size." :))
Definately has my attention... |
| Sapphire Snape |
2004.04.06 - 08:55AM |
2: After an Inauspicious Beginning |
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| Has Snape's embarrassment has led him to take charge here? Or perhaps he's been hiding something? Patiently (okay, I lie) awaiting your next chapter... ;) |
| Sapphire Snape |
2004.04.06 - 08:51AM |
1: A Pale Youth Appears at the Door |
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| I am thrilled that you have begun writing again, Ms. Ussep! Your portrayal of Snape is exactly how I imagine him, both as an adult, and now I find out as an adolescent as well (and note this is not as I write him, nor how I *wish* him to be). I am so looking forward to another dark, fabulous tale from your quill. |
| Persephone |
2004.04.06 - 08:04AM |
2: After an Inauspicious Beginning |
Anonymous |
| silly cow shes asked for it now. Please update now or soon i don't want to be too demanding on your creative talent ;0D |
| Melpomene Erato |
2004.04.05 - 10:29PM |
2: After an Inauspicious Beginning |
Signed |
| Wow! "a liittle sore"
I need to collect myslef now. Please update soon. |
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