Reviews for The Sexual Initiation of Severus Snape
| EllieK |
2004.10.06 - 11:26PM |
4: Well, Let's Try Again |
Signed |
| I love this scene. I find the work as a whole very erotic and very young Snape-like.
I am an american so please allow me to ask a stupid question. That Limerick about the lady from surrey, is that original? It struck me hilarious and I was actually reduced to a fit of giggles. |
| Daphne Dunham |
2004.09.01 - 01:09AM |
7: The Denouement |
Signed |
| Absolutely captivating! I could not stop reading it, and although I thought the end was lovely, I wished there was so much more. Snape was oh-so-perfectly written, exactly as I imagine he might have been as a youth. Well done! |
| Estrilda |
2004.08.26 - 06:33AM |
6: The Chains that Bind |
Anonymous |
| Loved the Accio Wand and Finite Incantatem from a completely muggle point of view. |
| Estrilda |
2004.08.26 - 06:29AM |
7: The Denouement |
Anonymous |
| What a terrific story. Reading one of your stories in the midst of a lot of others in the ship is kind of like a Shakespeare tragedy in the middle of Elizabeth Browning, a good dose of well written angst in a sea of fluff. Thanks. |
| ResistResist |
2004.08.11 - 05:53PM |
7: The Denouement |
Signed |
| I thoroughly enjoyed your story. Your teenage Snape is fantastic. I just loved him "gathering data" and in particular when he moved the lamp so that he could examine her. Excellent. |
| luna_fic |
2004.08.07 - 07:04PM |
7: The Denouement |
Anonymous |
| bloody brilliant fic! Very original premise too. I shall look up your other fics with relish! |
| bob |
2004.08.02 - 12:29PM |
1: A Pale Youth Appears at the Door |
Anonymous |
| hey, that is one different story, but pretty cool - I really see that little severus in your story!Rowling should be a little more erotic, thats more exctiting! Good job :) |
| Mawgrim |
2004.08.01 - 01:54PM |
7: The Denouement |
Anonymous |
| Excellent story. Severus was so much in character, fluctuating between the nervous, gawky youth and the controlled man he will become. The characterisation of the prostitute was also well drawn; she was a believable character who at no point turned into the cliched 'tart with a heart'. It was also very HOT! |
| snarkypants |
2004.07.19 - 07:39AM |
1: A Pale Youth Appears at the Door |
Anonymous |
| I loved this story! Very sexy, but not at all sentimental or romantic. Your incarnation of Severus is one of the best I've read, and I've very much enjoyed reading your collected works here! |
| Odd Doll |
2004.07.13 - 10:07PM |
6: The Chains that Bind |
Anonymous |
| Very nice again! Nice combination of creative detail with um, smut. |
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