Reviews for A Hogwarts Carol
|Rose of the West
||2009.11.05 - 02:15PM
||3: STAVE II: The First of the Three Spirits
|He starts this chapter more remorseful than he ends it, I think. Early memories bring up pain and he feels guilt over the way his choices affected some of those memories. Remembering the way he has to deal with Arthur raises feelings of annoyance. The way her hat drops to the floor as she disapears gave me the image of a candle being snuffed. His remorse came right back after that, didn't it?|
Author's Response: Yes, he's still in the process of learning what he'd been doing wrong all his life.