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Reviews for Flying With The Raven

NJ Dryad 2010.09.27 - 02:34AM 5: The Dark Side Signed
I love this setup, with Lucius wanting to turn Samara into an assassin via Imperio. It's a lot more interesting than the one in HBP. I wonder if JKR ever feels embarrassed that her fans come up with much more interesting stories than she did herself? And you used the word "sprang"! ("The gate sprang open to let him pass...") It annoys the heck out of me when people use "sprung" as a plain past tense verb instead of as a past perfect, which is what it's supposed to be. You deserve a 10 for that alone! Thank you!

Author's Response: Thanks and I'm glad you liked the set-up, even though, thanks to Severus intervention, nothing will come of Lucius' evil plan. Maybe not being a native speaker is an advantage here, as I had the "spring, sprang, sprung" drummed into me in school!

Anastasia Witchling 2010.07.21 - 05:57AM 18: Nineteen Years Later Signed
I loved this! Very believable and original... Thanks!

Author's Response: Thanks for your lovely comment!

BlondeAtHeart 2010.06.20 - 01:26PM 18: Nineteen Years Later Signed
Such a tease you are, leaving us, your faithful readers, with such questions. This story, I must say, was very tastefully written. I am very happy that Severus was given a second chance, for I too, was displeased with how J.K. Rowling so cruelly killed him off. I very much enjoyed reading this story and I hope you can find inspiration enough to keep giving neglected characters the life they deserve.

Author's Response: Thank you for your kind encouragement, reviews such as yours really fan the motivation to keep writing. A tease? Maybe... But that way everyone gets to use their own imagination :-)

CountessOfTheNight 2010.06.10 - 07:46PM 18: Nineteen Years Later Signed
Hey, I've just discovered your story and read it through in one go :) Now I look at the time and remember I have to go to university tomorrow (or rather: today *urgh*). So I just wanted to say: great story! I really like Samara and the fact that she's not a Mary Sue ;)

Author's Response: Wow! Thanks for the wonderful review!! Hope you didn't fall asleep during lectures. :-) I'm glad you think that Samara is not a Mary Sue. To a certain degree, she is, of course, but I tried to first and foremost make her an interesting OC.

sevfank 2010.05.29 - 08:12PM 18: Nineteen Years Later Signed
What a wonderful story! I like this so much better than JK's version. I really like the fact thas Severus is going to get his order of merlin. Great job!

Author's Response: Thanks you so much, I feel very flattered! I have to acknowledge Trickie Woo here, who inspired the idea of granting Severus an Order of Merlin.

Aryea 2010.05.20 - 10:15PM 18: Nineteen Years Later Signed
Love it!!!

Author's Response: Thanks you!

Kristinenote 2010.05.13 - 10:54PM 18: Nineteen Years Later Signed
I'm usually a 'silent reader' but this story was really good; enough to get me to revieiw! I absolutely adored it. Intriguing characters, elegantly written, and a plot that kept you wanting more. :)

Author's Response: Thanks for your wonderful review. I'm glad you decided to break your silence because reviews such as yours really are what make writing and publishing so much more fun and keep me going when I have a bit of writer's block!

Eleni 2010.04.02 - 09:44AM 18: Nineteen Years Later Signed
This has been a great journey. I liked your Severus and Samara, the plot was great, and I loved those flying horses. Looking forward to other stories from your hand. Dont worry of the few reviewes, I for one only reviewed a few times but I can tell your that I liked the story very much. I do understand that reviewes "feed" the muse and as from now on I will review more.

Author's Response: Hi Eleni, thanks for your reviews. I'm really glad you l;iked the story and the flying horses!

Eleni 2010.02.04 - 03:35PM 12: Light and Shadow Signed
another great chapter, now you have me biting my nails.

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it, the new chapter has just gone up! Thanks for the reviews!

greenwood 2010.01.13 - 12:06AM 1: Fateful Encounter Signed
Great opening chapter. Ravenwood's parents being killed by DE's will be something to come into play later no doubt and will make for some great missunderstandings *hehe* I wish I could read more tonight. Will have to get to it another day. I do look forward to reading more.

Author's Response: Thanks for your review! New chapter has just gone up.

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