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Reviews for The Unconditional Vow

tomo 2009.11.02 - 07:38PM 70: Sleeping in Light Signed
I want to thank you for writing an amazing story. I was drawn in the entire way. You really gave him the ending he deserved and I wish that JKR had saw fit to give him something similar. I love the way you've left it open, letting our minds to wander about the possibilities. This ending wasn't nearly as painful as it might have been because you drew it to a beautiful and realistic conclusion. Even though he's dead, he's not really gone. Again, wonderful! Absolutely wonderful. Such a perfect canon-compliant conclusion. Thank you, and I look forward to reading more works from you (I hope!)

Author's Response: Thank you, tomo, for your kind and complimentary words. I’m delighted the ending worked for you. It has been my absolute pleasure to share my work on Occlumency. Please check out my author bio page for more information on my next project. Thanks again!

Rose of the West 2009.11.02 - 04:53PM 70: Sleeping in Light Signed
That was a very artsy ending. It's not my cup of tea, but I'm sure a lot of folks will like it. As we've discussed before, I think there's far too much will they/won't they between chapters 40 and 60. As the reader, I was starting to get the feeling that you were just yanking my chain, and it made me stop caring what happened. On the whole the story works, and I'm sure most of the people who read these last few chapters will need hankies. It was probably my own fault for wanting something like Pride and Predudice while I was reading something like Wuthering Heights.

Author's Response: You are ascribing more power to me than I actually have; I wasn’t yanking your chain, I was simply telling a story. If you felt your chain being yanked, then that says something about your feelings in response to sustained sexual tension. Even though my story wasn’t your cup of tea, you’ve managed to drink the whole teapot. I’m grateful that you’ve shared your experience of the story with me, and have taken time to review each chapter.

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