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Reviews for The Unconditional Vow

roni0811 2015.07.10 - 01:10AM 64: Make This Go On Forever Signed
finally show his feeling for tessa!! that kiss was hot!!

Author's Response: Yes, they got there in the end! The kiss was challenging to write because of all the sexual tension leading up to that point; I wanted the scene to be satisfying for the reader.

makaem 2009.11.02 - 09:31PM 64: Make This Go On Forever Signed
But what if he doesn't make it. I wish he had let her say she loves him. But what a great scene.

Author's Response: He needed something to come back to...

FairyGlen 2009.11.01 - 06:57AM 64: Make This Go On Forever Signed
Yet another excellent chapter and, at last, ‘the kiss’. I hope they are allowed one more opportunity to ‘say the words’. My hope is pinned on the Tiger’s Eye Rings but then I am a hopeless romantic. I look forward to the closing chapters and congratulate you on your great storyline which has kept me totally engaged throughout. Your writing is beautifully descriptive and I look forward, in time, to reading more.

Author's Response: Thank you very much indeed for your comments on my writing, and I'm glad you're looking forward to the closing chapters. 'Saying the words' would be such a colossal moment for Severus, but for now, at least, he knows he is loved.

sevvy 2009.10.31 - 06:46PM 64: Make This Go On Forever Signed
I've just got back from a week's much-needed holiday but I think I needed to read that even more! I don't even want to think about where they go from here ...! :-)

Author's Response: Probably best not to dwell on it, would be my advice! Hope you had a nice holiday :-)

LadySeverus 2009.10.30 - 09:05AM 64: Make This Go On Forever Signed
F-I-N-A-L-L-Y! That's all I've got to say about that!

Author's Response: You sound... relieved :-)

star_girl 2009.10.28 - 09:57AM 64: Make This Go On Forever Signed
Ooh that made my knees go weak!

Author's Response: I had a similar experience when writing it!

Rosewood 2009.10.27 - 08:57PM 64: Make This Go On Forever Signed
Wowzee wow wow! Now that's a kiss. Great cliff hanger.

Author's Response: Thank you very much! It's been a long time coming...

Rose of the West 2009.10.27 - 05:41PM 64: Make This Go On Forever Signed
Nice kiss.

Author's Response: Thanks.

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