Reviews for Always By Your Side
star_girl |
2009.11.03 - 02:34PM |
15: XV: Fire and Ice |
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Not surprising that Severus' jealousy of Riverbed sufaced yet again, and it looks as if his jealousy is not entirely without foundation. Morgaine and Severus are making headway in opening up to each other, yet how will they move on from here?
Author's Response: Riverbed is, um, a problem. Well, not yet, but he has the potential of becoming one. And how will Morgaine and Severus move on? THAT question is bothering a lot of people. |
LadySeverus |
2009.10.30 - 09:45AM |
15: XV: Fire and Ice |
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So very painful for the two of them. How are they ever going to get closure in their current state of ghost and human? And I am not liking this Riverbed bloke at all. Hmmmm.
Author's Response: Who said they'll stay in their current state, ghost and human? As for Alek Riverbed, the man has secrets, and not of the good kind. Keep an eye on him. Thanks for reading and leaving a note. It's very much appreciated. /M |
memory |
2009.10.27 - 10:28AM |
15: XV: Fire and Ice |
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Two souls that can’t be divided. I found this chapter extremely moving in its progression. The last lines in particular are heartbreaking. You were able to show hope and desperation in just a few words. This is one of the reasons I love your writing. Concise, in a way, but creating a whole universe of feelings and images.
I am of course looking forward to more beautiful scenes and dialogs. And I hope that Riverbed will soon reveal his real self. Waiting patiently.
Author's Response: In some way, "two souls that can't be divided" sounds lovely and romantic. I start to doubt that it is very healthy, though, for either of them. As for dear Alek Riverbed ... the man has secrets that are yet to be revealed. Thanks for all your praise, Memory. You know I appreciate it (in my own special way ...) |
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