Reviews for Father of the Man
Very Small Prophet |
2013.09.14 - 02:48AM |
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Oh, Sevvie! Why didn't Madame Pomfrey take you under her wing and make a healer of you, instead of wasting her time on that spineless, sweet-talking Remus Lupin? You had so much to offer, if only anyone had cared.
Author's Response: Indeed. |
RRoy |
2009.11.18 - 09:54PM |
1: Baby |
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Sad way to start this.
Author's Response: Well, it was a rather sad life....
Actually, this chapter came out of the Lily-chapter--I had Severus think that Lily was open and trusting "like a baby" and thought, "when has he seen a baby?" |
Moira of the Mountain |
2009.10.04 - 03:45AM |
1: Baby |
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All the things he was - the dark and the light - all were already there, just waiting to be revealed. Well done !!
Author's Response: Indeed--the light and the dark! although I think I see it less as "waiting to be revealed" than as "what pushed him to develop such qualities." Glad you enjoyed.... |
morgaine_dulac |
2009.10.03 - 08:58AM |
1: Baby |
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A heart-warming and heart-breaking story at one and the same time. Thanks for sharing. /M
Author's Response: I started this fiction with the second chapter, actually, but then this one came in and grabbed me. (Actually I was working on the chapter where he first sees Lily, and I wrote a line about how Lily's openness and willingness to trust seemed babyish to Sev, and I thought--wait a sec, when did he meet a baby to make that comparison...?) |
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