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Reviews for A Better Childhood

NJ Dryad 2011.07.15 - 12:01AM 12: Chapter 12 – Flying with Charlie and Ro Signed
Rolanda's right. Adult Sev would sneer at everybody fussing over his child self, let alone finding him cute! But I think he'd be envious of the attention as well. This story is so sweet! Surely we have to encounter a Snape hater soon.

Author's Response: Thank you for your review!

alicebs 2009.09.02 - 08:09AM 12: Chapter 12 – Flying with Charlie and Ro Signed
Hi, just thought I would drop in to say I do enjoy your story and do not find it boring at all. Sev is really sweet. The only chapter that I found faintly disgusting was "the toilet monster". It is not a story with suspense or romance, but it has interesting interactions between the characters. Sometimes I wonder if you know where you are going with this story, since you already said that Severus will not be recovering his memories or returning to his former self. Even if it merely narrates "a better childhood", though, it is quite entertaining. Thanks!

Author's Response: The story is already finished. It just needs some time for my second beta to edit the chapters. The story is just a fluffy little story I wrote to soothe my nerves. In the end Harry will show up and Severus will help him to cope with his not so easy life. Otherwise it just shows Severus new childhood and how he reacts to new people and all the other new stuff. Thank you very much for your review!

zenobia 2009.09.01 - 01:07AM 12: Chapter 12 – Flying with Charlie and Ro Signed
This story gets to me every time I read it.

Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!

Rose of the West 2009.08.31 - 11:24PM 12: Chapter 12 – Flying with Charlie and Ro Signed
This was so much fun! Young Severus, as he interacts with more and more people, is doing really well. My four year old is so shy around other people that I call her "Cling Wrap" (after a brand of food wrapping we have in the US).

Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!




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