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Reviews for The Unconditional Vow

greenwood 2009.08.03 - 08:13PM 54: Out in the Cold Signed
I just reread this chapter after reading "out in the cold" and the irony is palatable. Once Severus was "out in the cold" by the one he loved and now he is doing the same to Tess. Tess, however, will not turn to the "dark side" because of his rejection but I wonder how it will work out. Just had to submit this thought.

Author's Response: I'm always delighted to hear readers' thoughts - submit away! Severus has dealt with the situation the only way he knows how - to push Tess out. It's sad that this is the way he responds, but he's never been treated any differently to know any better. Let's see what a fresh experience can do for him...

greenwood 2009.08.03 - 07:55PM 54: Out in the Cold Signed
Oh you left us at such a tense moment! I like how you explained why in cannon it seemed that Severus was not really keeping the Carows from harming the students (not knowing what was going on because Tess was not able to talk to him). I love how much tension you have created between the two of them. After what Severs thought he "heard" I could very well understand why someone like him would rebuff her. Not being an open person to begin with and prone to carrying grudges, he would sort of act like an over grown boy and play the "I'm hurt, you fingure it out" bit. Love it! I can't wait to find out how Dumberdore's revoking the Vow will impact how Tess can or will help Severus now. Such a good story!!

Author's Response: Oh, thanks, Greenwood - you've made my day! Despite the level of emotional intimacy he's achieved, Severus is still petulant and juvenile. He's not had enough experience of being accepted genuinely. However, he's made some progress; he's more human and falliable - not the automaton he was before. Sadly, the students of Hogwarts are suffering because of it. I've just submitted the next two chapters, and am taking a short break to recharge the batteries! Thanks for your review.

Rose of the West 2009.08.03 - 12:06AM 54: Out in the Cold Signed
Well, well, the Great Meddler sees a need to involve himself, yet again. I can't say I have great hopes for his intervention.

Author's Response: Sometimes I think you have X-ray vision, Rose ;-)

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