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| Luply | 2009.08.19 - 10:07AM | 19: Chapter 19 | Signed |
| Beautiful story. You worked with very strong feelings in this one, like love/hate and insecurity/mental instability. Great job! Author's Response: Thank you! I am glad you came along for the ride! I appreciate your consistency with reviewing. Livvy | |||
| makaem | 2009.08.12 - 07:46PM | 17: Chapter 17 | Signed |
| This is not an easy story to read, but I think you know that. It is like you have taken all the dark aspects of your other fics and rolled them into this one. And I love your stories, so I'm hanging in on this one ( I like it, but I'm a little out of my comfort zone) . I'm curious to see what you do with Aubrey. I hoping something will happen to allow her to meet him as an equal.I love all of your stories, and I think if this was a hidden before voting story I would know it was yours (or Shellsnapeluver's-- I can see elements of one of my favorite's "Consuming Me"). Sorry this is so long, but "lovely story" didn't seem right, even though I think it's really good. Author's Response: LOL! I understand. It's more like a beautiful/grotesque thing. I'm glad you chose to reach out of your comfort zone. Thanks! Livvy | |||
| Falon | 2009.08.12 - 05:53PM | 1: Chapter 1 | Signed |
| Awesome Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! I hope you like the ending! Thanks, Livvy | |||
| Luply | 2009.08.09 - 09:20PM | 16: Chapter 16 | Signed |
| As usual you made a great job with the characters, I can understand Aubrey and her insecurity about a new relationship with severus. Thanks for post 2 chapters! Author's Response: I thought it would be more realistic for there to be a two steps forward, one step back kind of deal. You just don't "get over" things overnight. Thanks! Livvy | |||
| lizette | 2009.08.07 - 07:46PM | 16: Chapter 16 | Signed |
| Congratulations for another fantastic story! Very well written and I just love Luna, she's so wise! Author's Response: Yes, I adore Luna. She is so intuitive-a hidden gem! Thanks! Livvy | |||
| Luply | 2009.08.02 - 01:08PM | 14: Chapter 14 | Signed |
| Wow, intense, very intense ... her hate and her confusion are so strong, let's see what Luna can do to help. Author's Response: Good. I'm glad that came through strong enough. I wanted to really convey a picture of her desperation and fear. Thanks! Livvy | |||
| Elaine Lahey | 2009.07.30 - 12:54AM | 13: Chapter 13 | Signed |
| At last, a ray of hope at the end! Snape reminds me of Silas Marner in this chapter, a bitter, lonely old man raising a baby girl. Author's Response: I have never read Silas Marner, but I did see a Steve Martin movie based on the book once. I probably should read it one of these days. Thanks for your review! I hope you like where I take this next. Thanks, Livvy | |||
| makaem | 2009.07.26 - 12:23AM | 11: Chapter 11 | Signed |
| So have we reached the turning point? It felt that way. Will Dumbledore forgive him? Author's Response: There will be a very definite turning point, but not until the end of chapter 13. Dumbledore will forgive him. Circumstances will change and DD's viewpoint will not be so harsh. There will be bigger problems to tend to by that time. Thanks! Livvy | |||
| Elaine Lahey | 2009.07.23 - 05:17PM | 9: Chapter 9 | Signed |
| OMG! I hope Aubrey is able to outwit him. Please post again soon; now I'm on tenter hooks. Author's Response: Thanks for your review. I hope you are still reading and wondering how this will lead. Yes, Aubrey is frightened and will run away. Now it will be Snape's turn to feel some pain. Thanks! Livvy | |||
| makaem | 2009.07.23 - 12:46PM | 9: Chapter 9 | Signed |
| Wow. Author's Response: Yeah, I guess that says it all... Thanks, Livvy | |||
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