Reviews for The Moment It Began
kittylefish |
2009.07.05 - 06:17PM |
64: Chapter Sixty-Four |
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well, at least tobias is doing well, and i'm so happy lily's parents were supportive of the engagement. i guess we'll have to wait and see what happens with petunia.
Author's Response: Things are tough between Petunia and Lily... |
aurora borealis |
2009.06.10 - 04:11PM |
64: Chapter Sixty-Four |
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I liked the emphasis on family in this chapter - Snape and Tobias forging some tentative bonds, being willing for Tobias to meet Lily, the Evans' acceptance of Severus and the news of the engagement, even Petunia being a pill (still a typical family moment!) I admit to being curious as to how Voldemort will be defeated in your story, without a Harry Potter in existence - I look forward to finding out (if you are planning on continuing the story to that point!)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Glad you liked the family moments. I try to make them realistic.
I do intend to keep going until Voldemort is defeated. You'll see... ;) |
morgaine_dulac |
2009.06.09 - 03:55PM |
64: Chapter Sixty-Four |
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I'm glad Tobias is doing well. And I hope Petunia won't spoil anything for her sister.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Things between the sisters are still going to be unresolved for a while, I'm afraid. |
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