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Reviews for The Unconditional Vow

hexgirl 2009.05.15 - 06:12AM 45: Broken Eggshells Signed
So now they have their own little place, and with room service too. Who knows what might develop in there (apart from the potions). I know, I know, I'm running ahead - I am slapping my own wrist as penance. Can I also slap Severus though? Someone needs to - go on Professor, let her give you a hug! Can't wait for the next exciting instalment. You have me as always on tenterhooks.

Author's Response: I thoroughly enjoyed the cringe factor in Severus's anticipation of said hug. Is it wrong for me to have such fun torturing the characters?!

Rose of the West 2009.05.11 - 12:30AM 45: Broken Eggshells Signed
Lovely chapter, as always. While they're making truth serum, couldn't they work on some general purpose healing potion, too?

Author's Response: It's having the healing potion in the right place at the right time that will be tricky ;-) Thanks for your review!

sevvy 2009.05.10 - 04:26PM 45: Broken Eggshells Signed
I simply can't wait for the next chapter now (in response to my review of the last chapter, you did say things were going to change for these two!) I am still hopeful that they won't be able to hold out much longer with their feelings for each other ...! I just have to add here that this is such a 'professional' story; so much more polished and flowing than almost any others I've read and it feels like it could and should have co-existed as a 'sub' or 'back ground' plot in the books. :-)

Author's Response: Thank you for such a lovely compliment! My two betas have been wonderful; one applies the polish and the other helps with the flow. We've made a good team so far!

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