Occlumency :: A Severus Snape archive

Reviews for A Better Childhood

greenwood	2009.05.07 - 08:11PM	9: Chapter 9 – The First Night	Signed
Boy this story brings me back to my son's childhood (with out all the fear of course but all the little mishaps that keep you running!) I have enjoyed this story and hope to read more. Author's Response: I'm glad you like it. Thank you very much for your review!

bdancer	2009.05.06 - 09:03PM	9: Chapter 9 – The First Night	Signed
Oh... I love the speech pattern Severus has. I can hear his sweet little voice saying "Sowy". Poor little guy; so many things to get out of sorts about causing him to cry. Sigh.....challenge or not, I wish I had a little boy just like him. Thanks, for all your time to record your stories. They are really hard work. Even if it is fun. I have been checking for your next installment and will check often for the next one. Author's Response: My beta is back now and so I hope I can update more often now! Thank you very much for your review!

Rose of the West	2009.05.06 - 11:54AM	9: Chapter 9 – The First Night	Signed
It's amazing that with all of this going on it was just one day! I'm glad it's essentially over and that he can see how everything will be pretty much just as nice on the second day, and the day after that and so on until he stops worrying and fearing everything. Author's Response: It will become better for him soon. Thank you very much for your review!