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Reviews for Two Sides Against the Middle

debjunk	2009.03.09 - 01:14AM	81: April	Signed
I think it makes sense for Severus to prepare for the worst. With his position, the chance of him surviving are not good. Emily, in that case, would definitely need to take the family and her far, far away. I've enjoyed the growth of your writing throughout this. Each chapter gets better than the last. Author's Response: Thank you, again, for your kind words! I see these two as preparing for everything they can think of while knowing that just about anything could happen and having to mentally prepare for the worst. I can only imagine being in such a position.

Cuthalion	2009.03.08 - 07:21PM	81: April	Signed
Oh.My.Goodness. The way you write this makes me fear that you've decided to stay true to canon when it comes to our beloved Potions Master. Of course this is YOUR tale, and you may do as you please, but after you saved Siriús, I still nurse the tiny hope in my heart that you might- just MIGHT - write a different ending. sighs Beautifully written, and thrilling to boot. Cúthalion Author's Response: Thank you. I can't give a hint one way or another at this point, since the evil day is almost upon us. Severus and Emily have prepared as well as they can for the unknown, but they still have to realize that anything can happen at this point. I know it's a bit schmaltzy in places, here, but the situation seemed to call for it. Thank you so much for your review.