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Reviews for Singing Up to a Capulet

AuroraSinistra 2009.08.22 - 10:31PM 19: One Day Signed
Your story was fun and intense at the same time! I liked the idea of being able to have a true and false Patronus, though I didn't think a bat represented Rora since I tend to think of Snape as the bat. But I'm glad they got a happy ending, thanks for writing!

Author's Response: I was playing with the idea that your Patronus manifests as that of the person you love (e.g. Snape -> Lily). So Aurora's would be Snape's bat (b/c he's totally a bat!) Thanks for R&C!

AuroraSinistra 2009.08.22 - 10:00PM 11: The Summons Signed
As touching as it was to read in DH Dumbledore saying "After all this time?" in response to Snape's patronus, reading your "Donít tell me itís still that fucking deer!Ē line really went in the complete opposite direction and was hilarious. Thanks for the laugh! I think with or without Lily, anyone loving someone as complicated as Snape would be frustrated in one way or another.

AuroraSinistra 2009.08.22 - 09:43PM 4: Disillusionment Signed
So Aurora is a student at Hogwarts when Severus is a professor there? (his first few years there?) I'm curious to see how she knows about Lily.

AuroraSinistra 2009.08.22 - 09:37PM 1: Kiss Off Signed
I would have liked more of a back story to start with, and I think there was perhaps a flashback (the part with the tattoo) but at first was confused because I thought it was something going on during the concert. The outcast/punk rock idea sounds interesting though and I'll check out the other chapters.

Rose of the West 2009.03.23 - 09:53PM 19: One Day Signed
I like that they came together, finally and that it was more as equals. It leaves us knowing that they can have a solid relationship together.

Author's Response: Thanks. I did feel that we needed to see an (as you say) equal experience, rather than her topping him.

Rose of the West 2009.03.19 - 09:11AM 18: Time to Say Goodbye Signed
She must be very confused at this point. He's sending off mixed signals, but of course he's not at his best. I hope she hears him out and hasn't left the castle or something.

Author's Response: I'm still working on the next chapter - which should be the last. Hope you'll find it a satisfying conclusion.

Rose of the West 2009.03.11 - 12:39AM 17: Aftermath Signed
That was full of sweet little moments. The bat patronus is quite perfect.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review!

Rose of the West 2009.03.09 - 03:16AM 16: One Hour Signed
I can see her making him pay for making her wait so long, but this seems a bit extreme.

Author's Response: To be honest, I didn't really see it as punishment, per se. I was writing it more from the view that SS is not able to engage with his true emotions unless compelled to - his pride etc have to be broken down. If Aurora were going to punish him, she wouldn't let him have his cookie! ;)

Rose of the West 2009.03.09 - 03:06AM 15: The Bat Patronus Signed
Oh, dear. She must be frantic.

Author's Response: I actually found it very challenging to write panic. Maybe you could tell!

Rose of the West 2009.03.09 - 03:04AM 14: Dr. Faustus Signed
Oh, dear, what a suggestion! If that doesn't fortify Severus's resolve to keep the Tedious One from winning, I don't know what would.

Author's Response: Aside from being (well) icky, I figured that Carrow was also the one least likely to hold SS' respect (therefore the one to make the idea most repugnant).

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