Reviews for A Better Childhood
greenwood |
2009.05.07 - 08:11PM |
9: Chapter 9 The First Night |
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Boy this story brings me back to my son's childhood (with out all the fear of course but all the little mishaps that keep you running!) I have enjoyed this story and hope to read more.
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it. Thank you very much for your review! |
bdancer |
2009.05.06 - 09:03PM |
9: Chapter 9 The First Night |
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Oh... I love the speech pattern Severus has. I can hear his sweet little voice saying "Sowy". Poor little guy; so many things to get out of sorts about causing him to cry. Sigh.....challenge or not, I wish I had
a little boy just like him. Thanks, for all your time to record your stories. They are really hard work. Even if it is fun. I have been checking for your next installment and will check often for the next one.
Author's Response: My beta is back now and so I hope I can update more often now! Thank you very much for your review! |
bdancer |
2009.05.06 - 08:45PM |
8: Chapter 8 The Bath |
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So good to come home from a long hard day at work and enjoy the images you you about describe so well. What a delightful time I have reading about Severus and bath time. Naggy got me giggling as he searched for the "toilet monster." Gee....I remember being scared of the toilet monster.......
Author's Response: I'm glad you like the story. Thank you very much for your review! |
Rose of the West |
2009.05.06 - 11:54AM |
9: Chapter 9 The First Night |
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It's amazing that with all of this going on it was just one day! I'm glad it's essentially over and that he can see how everything will be pretty much just as nice on the second day, and the day after that and so on until he stops worrying and fearing everything.
Author's Response: It will become better for him soon. Thank you very much for your review! |
Rose of the West |
2009.03.28 - 09:45AM |
8: Chapter 8 The Bath |
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It's fun to watch these two ladies with a smaller child.
Author's Response: I'm very glad you enjoy it! |
Rose of the West |
2009.03.21 - 05:15PM |
7: Chapter 7 Stork |
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I'm glad he has a friend. My little ones all like to have a lovey.
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review! |
Sorla |
2009.03.07 - 08:04AM |
6: Chapter 6 A Visit from Alastor |
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awww, poor little sev,
that hiding under the bed reminded me of when i was younger
Author's Response: I hope that you didn't have a real reason to do this. |
Rose of the West |
2009.03.07 - 02:05AM |
6: Chapter 6 A Visit from Alastor |
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I know some children who feel that way about the bath, too, and it's not cold, here. Very realistic.
Author's Response: Thank you very much! |
Rosewood |
2009.03.06 - 08:25PM |
6: Chapter 6 A Visit from Alastor |
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The way you've captured the child's point-of-view is mesmerizing. I'm thoroughly enjoying your story thus far. Please keep up the good work.
Author's Response: Thank you very much! |
luvsev4ever |
2009.03.04 - 06:30AM |
5: Chapter 5 - The Toilet Monster |
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I like this story a great deal and I love Severus as a child he's so sweet, he is better off here.
Really looking forward to future chapters of this wonderful story!
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review! |
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