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Allodus 2011.08.21 - 03:07PM 14: Chapter 14 – Poppy's Disapproval Signed
I wish you would continue to write this story, it's really interesting and well-written !

NJ Dryad 2011.07.15 - 02:05AM 14: Chapter 14 – Poppy's Disapproval Signed
i love the way everyone is so solicitous about Severus. In his previous life, no one cared if he worked himself into the ground. It looks like in this life, he'll get all the caring he didn't get before and then some. Good! Nobody deserves it more.

Author's Response: Thank you for your review!

NJ Dryad 2011.07.15 - 12:01AM 12: Chapter 12 – Flying with Charlie and Ro Signed
Rolanda's right. Adult Sev would sneer at everybody fussing over his child self, let alone finding him cute! But I think he'd be envious of the attention as well. This story is so sweet! Surely we have to encounter a Snape hater soon.

Author's Response: Thank you for your review!

NJ Dryad 2011.07.14 - 11:54PM 11: Chapter 11 – Pomona and Filius Signed
It's so great to see everyone working together to make sure Little Sev is protected and happy. That alone will make a vast difference in the way he turns out.

Author's Response: Thank you for your review!

NJ Dryad 2011.07.14 - 11:42PM 10: Chapter 10 – The Man in the Photo Signed
This is a really cute story. I keep thinking you're going overboard in your descriptions of the abuse Severus suffered at home, but considering what you do for a living, maybe not. A kind, compassionate Albus is kind of disorienting, but since this is AU anyway, I guess I can go with it. I'll put up with a lot of weirdness for a good story, and this one is very good.

Author's Response: I'm glad you like it! Thank you for your review!

marilyn 2010.12.11 - 01:26PM 14: Chapter 14 – Poppy's Disapproval Signed
This story is so cute and brought tears to my eyes, especially in the beginning. I love so much, that Severus is finally getting the warmth and care he deserves. Very moving.

Author's Response: Thank you for your review!

seviswear 2010.07.06 - 05:55PM 14: Chapter 14 – Poppy's Disapproval Signed
I love this story--I come back to it all the time. Please write more! I didn't think I'd care for it, but you captured how Severus would have acted in this situation perfectly.

Author's Response: This story is finished, but I can't find a beta!!! I'm looking for months now to get one who is able to get rid of all the mistakes so I can submit it here. If you know a beta, let me know. Otherwise I can just advice you to go over to fanfiction(dot)net and read the whole story there. Plus a sequel! Thanks for your review!

Rose of the West 2009.12.03 - 01:41AM 14: Chapter 14 – Poppy's Disapproval Signed
Yes, I'm the same one reading your Harry's New Family story on FFN! I've really enjoyed both stories. My four year old eats literally a handful of food at various intervals of the day. The trick is to make sure that almost all of those handfuls are healthy! I love the affectionate way Alastor behaves with the little Severus.

Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!

bdancer 2009.11.30 - 09:05PM 14: Chapter 14 – Poppy's Disapproval Signed
Oh it is so good to get another chapter from you! I have been continually checking and hoping you were well and found time to keep writing. This chapter is very real to me in the way a four year old with Severus'es background would react. There are also some meaningful lessons here that we grownups often forget when being with little ones. It is delightful you are representing each character to be extra patient and kind to him.

Author's Response: You don't have to worry about my well-being. I have finished this story for months now and already have written and uploaded the sequel to this story on fanfiction(dot)net. But my beta who I need to make the chapter acceptable for this site has problems and so I can only upload so seldom. On fanfiction(dot)net the story is long finished and the sequel also is completed. So if you are eager to read it and can accept a few mistakes in the text, just go over to my profil there and read. Otherwise you have to accept the slow pace because i don't know how quick my beta will be in future. Thank you very much for your review! Sunny

zenobia 2009.11.30 - 11:05AM 14: Chapter 14 – Poppy's Disapproval Signed
Love this story. The chapters are always to short.

Author's Response: Hahaha, I'm sorry for my short chapter but I write them mostly at work in my unpaid night hours and so that's the length that feels best for me. Thank you for your review!

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