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| leffe | 2009.09.17 - 12:39PM | 13: Chapter 13 - The Greenhouse | Signed |
| A really sweet story! You mentioned in the first chapter that this idea to de-age Severus wasn't new, but I have never seen a story about that before. I like the idea. Could you perhaps tell me the names of the other stories like yours so I can read them too? About your story: I would have imagined little Severus to cry less, make a greater effort to hide his feelings and lie a lot... But he would probably be very scared, just like you describe. I'll check for new chapters. Thank you for writing! | |||
| Rose of the West | 2009.09.09 - 09:52PM | 13: Chapter 13 - The Greenhouse | Signed |
| As always, it's an enchanting chapter. I can see that 'Arlie is getting to be Sev's "best friend." Minerva is going to have some competition! | |||
| alicebs | 2009.09.02 - 08:09AM | 12: Chapter 12 Flying with Charlie and Ro | Signed |
| Hi, just thought I would drop in to say I do enjoy your story and do not find it boring at all. Sev is really sweet. The only chapter that I found faintly disgusting was "the toilet monster". It is not a story with suspense or romance, but it has interesting interactions between the characters. Sometimes I wonder if you know where you are going with this story, since you already said that Severus will not be recovering his memories or returning to his former self. Even if it merely narrates "a better childhood", though, it is quite entertaining. Thanks! Author's Response: The story is already finished. It just needs some time for my second beta to edit the chapters. The story is just a fluffy little story I wrote to soothe my nerves. In the end Harry will show up and Severus will help him to cope with his not so easy life. Otherwise it just shows Severus new childhood and how he reacts to new people and all the other new stuff. Thank you very much for your review! | |||
| zenobia | 2009.09.01 - 01:07AM | 12: Chapter 12 Flying with Charlie and Ro | Signed |
| This story gets to me every time I read it.
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review! | |||
| Rose of the West | 2009.08.31 - 11:24PM | 12: Chapter 12 Flying with Charlie and Ro | Signed |
| This was so much fun! Young Severus, as he interacts with more and more people, is doing really well. My four year old is so shy around other people that I call her "Cling Wrap" (after a brand of food wrapping we have in the US). Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review! | |||
| xmiriamx | 2009.08.22 - 10:20AM | 11: Chapter 11 Pomona and Filius | Signed |
| This is great! I can't wait for the next chapter Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review! | |||
| Rose of the West | 2009.08.19 - 11:22PM | 11: Chapter 11 Pomona and Filius | Signed |
| His circle enlarges... cute! I don't think I would like Peeves very much, either. Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review! | |||
| halfbloodsnape | 2009.07.06 - 04:20AM | 10: Chapter 10 The Man in the Photo | Signed |
| I'm just looking forward to the next chapter... Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review! | |||
| Rose of the West | 2009.06.03 - 02:17AM | 10: Chapter 10 The Man in the Photo | Signed |
| No specific comments on this chapter. I'm just glad to see more of it. Author's Response: I'm glad you are still reading! Thank you very much for your review! | |||
| bdancer | 2009.05.31 - 07:33PM | 10: Chapter 10 The Man in the Photo | Signed |
| Oh, I am so glad to read Sev's update. You describe him so well I can see him in my mind running into Minerva's arms with large sparkling black eyes. He is giggling with his long black hair waving softly with his movements.
This is going to be very interesting reading how he interacts with the wizarding world. Hopefully, Charlie is effective at running interferance for him. I am anxious to read his reaction to the Weasley family. Giggle....I think he will fall in love them this time. Author's Response: I'm glad you are still reading! Thank you very much for your review! | |||
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