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Reviews for The Unconditional Vow

hexgirl 2009.01.11 - 09:36AM 35: Dreams and Fables Signed
Thanks for updating just in time for Snape's birthday too!. Really enjoyed this chapter, loving the interaction and growing friendship between Severus and Contessa. Even if you end it as canon compliant at least it will leave the reader feeling less of a sense of anguish that he died without love - or was that just me? Hope you're feeling better soon. I notice you live in the Ribble Valley. I was up their recently for a New year walk and a sandwich in the Inn at Whitewell - lovely part of the world. Looking forward to the next chapter, but don't exert yourself, your health comes first.

Author's Response: I doubt it was just you! Yes, I know the Inn at Whitewell (a peculiar little place...) and you're quite right - health comes first, because without it there would be no story at all. Thanks for your review!

johnbly341 2009.01.08 - 09:30PM 35: Dreams and Fables Signed
I've really been enjoying your story all the way through. You've done a great job with Severus's prickly nature and I'm especially enjoying the fine line that Contessa has to walk to stay in character with her colleagues. I do hope you feel better soon!

Author's Response: Oh, I like a prickly Severus, he's such fun to work with. Nice to know you're still reading and thanks for your best wishes.

star_girl 2009.01.08 - 03:57AM 35: Dreams and Fables Signed
Sorry to hear you aren't well, I hope you get better soon and have the strength to finish this intriguing story.

Author's Response: Thanks! The recovery is likely to be slow, but I will definitely finish the story. I won't be complete without it!

sevvy 2009.01.07 - 03:38AM 35: Dreams and Fables Signed
I've just picked up on this story again and I'm really glad I did as it's so good. I somehow think that Severus is at last started to realise his attraction to Contessa (even if it is still only at a subconscious level at the moment!) As a romantic, I am desperate for something to happen between them; I know this wasn't your original intention but I live in hope! I'm sorry to hear you've not been well; I hope it isn't this awful 'flu which has been doing the rounds. It got my husband & I really badly several weeks ago & I've now just followed it with a bout of Winter Vomiting Virus - it's a fun time of year for sure! Do hope you feel better soon and will be able to update as this story just gets better and better! I hope it's not too late to wish you a Happy New Year.

Author's Response: Severus has a way of rationalising which effectively distorts and denies feelings, meaning they remain hidden from even himself. I hope he eventually looks them in the eye, although that doesn't necessarily mean romance! Who knows? Happy new year to you too

makaem 2009.01.07 - 02:10AM 35: Dreams and Fables Signed
That was another wonderful chapter. I'm glad she has something to make things at Hogwarts seem worthwhile. Snape seems a little jealous of someone else being the object of her attention, wonder if he'll realize this. but I'm guessing contessa will have her heart broken no matter what happens. Take care of yourself. I hope you feel better.

Author's Response: Snape's jealousy took me by surprise in this chapter; it just happened of its own accord. Thanks for your review and kind thoughts.

Rose of the West 2009.01.06 - 11:47PM 35: Dreams and Fables Signed
I'm so sorry you haven't been well. I hope you are better, soon. This was a great chapter and just as I suspected, Contessa perked up a little since she could help someone else with their troubles. I like that being with her made Severus feel as comfortable as he did with Lily and hope that eventually he comes to understand that he's comfortable in the present, not just in his memories.

Author's Response: Thanks for your good wishes. You're very perceptive - yes - the feeling of comfort is lingering on the edge of his awareness at the moment.

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