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Reviews for Everything Will Be Okay Soon

bdancer 2009.01.03 - 06:25PM 4: Chapter 4 Signed
So far this is one of my favorite stories in this collection. You show several dimensions to each charactor. All of us have more than one dimension to our personalities and exist in dualities. Your words to tell your stories are well chosen. I can actually see your story in my head. Of course Severus has nuturing capabilities. But he is intense about everthing and is often misunderstood. I have run across a few people like this. It takes a long time to help them trust you and lower their defenses. And it was difficult, often painful but these Severuses are now my most loyal friends. Please keep writing.

Author's Response: This was my first story. I wrote it for a contest on a yahoo group. It's finished and I don't plan to write on it later. Do you read on fanfiction.net as well or just here? I'm very glad about your kind words. Thanks for reviewing!

CareCrystal 2008.12.09 - 04:28PM 4: Chapter 4 Signed
Reviewer: Trickie Woo Signed [Report This] Date: 26/11/08 - 02:24 pm Title: Chapter 4 Oh dear, poor Severus now is at the mercy of two withches who want to take care of him. Dear, dear, how will he bear that? Sleep will help him recover from that headache and get back to feeling he is self sufficient again and his pride will be reinstated.

Reviewer: morgaine_dulac Signed [Report This] Date: 22/11/08 - 02:34 pm Title: Chapter 4 “When will you ever learn that it isn’t a weakness to ask other people for help, Severus?”

That is a beautiful line and fits your beautiful little story just right.

Thanks for sharing. /M

Author's Response: Thank you very much. I'm glad you liked my story! :)




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