Reviews for The Visitor
||2008.12.09 - 03:46PM
||1: Chapter 1
|Reviewer: morgaine_dulac Signed [Report This]
Date: 25/11/08 - 11:44 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh, well done Neville!
And I would not put it past Snape to have jinxed the Potions position ;-)
Author's Response: Thank you, yes I think it was well over time for Neville to get his due. He is one of my favorite characters in the series. I'm also glad you thought it amusing and probably believable that Snape would jinxe the Potions position. Thanks for the reading and reviewing, as always. Cheers!
Reviewer: seachange Signed [Report This]
Date: 25/11/08 - 10:28 am Title: Chapter 1
I've seen that kind of "forgiveness" before. Neville uses his claim that he's come to forgive as an opportunity to get a bit of his own back, by telling Snape off and announcing his own superiority. Shows his "fairness and compassion" I suppose. Well written.
Author's Response: Thank you, yes "forgiveness" comes in many forms. I'm sure I was working out some of my own demons in this piece. I have a piece of flair on Facebook, that says, "Forgive your enemies, it screws with their heads." I'm just glad that Severus took it in good stride and commended Neville for he braveness and honesty. Acknowledgement is perhaps the best forgiveness and way to heal. Wow, I sound like Dr. Phil. I'd better stop writing. Thanks for reading and reviewing. Cheers!
Reviewer: Rose of the West Signed [Report This]
Date: 25/11/08 - 09:51 am Title: Chapter 1
That's fun! I'm sure Neville would completely do that.
Author's Response: Thanks, I love Neville, I'm glad you found how I portrayed him believable. I'm also glad you enjoyed the story. Thanks for reading and reviewing. Cheers!