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| morgaine_dulac | 2008.11.04 - 04:22PM | 1: Chapter 1 | Signed |
| Forgot to say: congratulations on your first fic and your English. Doing good! /M Author's Response: I think I have answered on this review before but after the upgrade here on Occlumency it seems a few reviews and responses got lost. So again thank you for the review! | |||
| morgaine_dulac | 2008.11.04 - 04:19PM | 1: Chapter 1 | Signed |
| Oh, this was very sweet. There sure is a caring human being under those billowing black robes. Well done. /M Author's Response: And again the problem with the upgrade. Thanks for your review! | |||
| sevvy | 2008.11.04 - 09:14AM | 1: Chapter 1 | Signed |
| This looks like the beginning of something good. I think you have kept Severus very well 'in character' here. (He definately has a caring side & doesn't always do things just because he considers them his duty.) I look forward to more! Author's Response: I think I have answered on this review before but after the upgrade here on Occlumency it seems a few reviews and responses got lost. So again thank you for the review! | |||
| Trickie Woo | 2008.11.03 - 07:53PM | 1: Chapter 1 | Signed |
| I like that you showed the caring side of Severus and that he is caring for her becase he cares for her and wants to do it, not be cause he feels he owes it to her. He knows what she's done for him, and it's not payback, he wants to give back to her in kind. You have done very well with your English in this so far. Author's Response: Thank you very much. Yes, Severus isn't acting out of guilt. I'm glad you like it. I will submit the next and last chapter as soon as my beta corrected it! | |||
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