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bdancer 2009.01.03 - 06:25PM 4: Chapter 4 Signed
So far this is one of my favorite stories in this collection. You show several dimensions to each charactor. All of us have more than one dimension to our personalities and exist in dualities. Your words to tell your stories are well chosen. I can actually see your story in my head. Of course Severus has nuturing capabilities. But he is intense about everthing and is often misunderstood. I have run across a few people like this. It takes a long time to help them trust you and lower their defenses. And it was difficult, often painful but these Severuses are now my most loyal friends. Please keep writing.

Author's Response: This was my first story. I wrote it for a contest on a yahoo group. It's finished and I don't plan to write on it later. Do you read on fanfiction.net as well or just here? I'm very glad about your kind words. Thanks for reviewing!

CareCrystal 2008.12.09 - 04:28PM 4: Chapter 4 Signed
Reviewer: Trickie Woo Signed [Report This] Date: 26/11/08 - 02:24 pm Title: Chapter 4 Oh dear, poor Severus now is at the mercy of two withches who want to take care of him. Dear, dear, how will he bear that? Sleep will help him recover from that headache and get back to feeling he is self sufficient again and his pride will be reinstated.

Reviewer: morgaine_dulac Signed [Report This] Date: 22/11/08 - 02:34 pm Title: Chapter 4 “When will you ever learn that it isn’t a weakness to ask other people for help, Severus?”

That is a beautiful line and fits your beautiful little story just right.

Thanks for sharing. /M

Author's Response: Thank you very much. I'm glad you liked my story! :)

CareCrystal 2008.12.09 - 04:08PM 3: Chapter 3 Signed
Reviewer: Trickie Woo Signed [Report This] Date: 26/11/08 - 02:17 pm Title: Chapter 3 I've been having computer problems, or I would have gotten back to you sooner. I'm using my husband's computer when I get a chance until mine gets back from the shop.

I'm sorry the chocolate doesn't work for you, It's been failproof for me for years now. Some people I know swear by ginger, they keep candied ginger nearby or make ginger tea with the powdered kind. I hope Severus gets a chance to take care of his own headache soon, now that Poppy seems to be on the road to recovery. She should wake up in the morning feeling much better.

Reviewer: morgaine_dulac Signed [Report This] Date: 21/11/08 - 02:28 pm Title: Chapter 3 Hm he's so sweet at times.

Author's Response: Oh, yes, he is! :-) Thanks for the review!

CareCrystal 2008.12.09 - 04:02PM 2: Chapter 2 Signed
Reviewer: morgaine_dulac Signed [Report This] Date: 10/11/08 - 10:41 am Title: Chapter 2 Nasty little bat, isn't he? Yet so adorable ;-)

Author's Response: :D

Reviewer: Trickie Woo Signed [Report This] Date: 09/11/08 - 09:45 pm Title: Chapter 2 Your English is flawless in this. Severus needs the headache cure I found that always works for me. I used to take prescribed medications for migraines, but one day I ate a piece of chocolate right after I took my piulls, and lo and behold, the migraine went complete away within ten minutes. I tried it the next time I felt a migraine coming on and once again the migraine was gone in ten minutes. It has worked everytime since then and that was quite a few years ago. Now I'm off the prescribed drugs and I try chocolate first and if the headache isn't gone within a few minutes I add an OTC migraine pill, it works everytime. My doctor told me it was the caffeine in the chocolate, and said it was OK to do it if it worked for me, her only caveat was that I should limit myself to 2 pieces.

Author's Response: Oh really? I wished it would work for me as well. I tried after reading your comment but it didn't work. :( But thanks for telling me. I uploaded the last chapter and the story is now finished! :)

Reviewer: Rose of the West Signed [Report This] Date: 09/11/08 - 09:24 pm Title: Chapter 2 I don't have a good sense of where this is going, but it's a fun read.

Author's Response: Thanks for your review. I uploaded the last chapter and the story is now finished! :)

morgaine_dulac 2008.11.04 - 04:22PM 1: Chapter 1 Signed
Forgot to say: congratulations on your first fic and your English. Doing good! /M

Author's Response: I think I have answered on this review before but after the upgrade here on Occlumency it seems a few reviews and responses got lost. So again thank you for the review!

morgaine_dulac 2008.11.04 - 04:19PM 1: Chapter 1 Signed
Oh, this was very sweet. There sure is a caring human being under those billowing black robes. Well done. /M

Author's Response: And again the problem with the upgrade. Thanks for your review!

sevvy 2008.11.04 - 09:14AM 1: Chapter 1 Signed
This looks like the beginning of something good. I think you have kept Severus very well 'in character' here. (He definately has a caring side & doesn't always do things just because he considers them his duty.) I look forward to more!

Author's Response: I think I have answered on this review before but after the upgrade here on Occlumency it seems a few reviews and responses got lost. So again thank you for the review!

Trickie Woo 2008.11.03 - 07:53PM 1: Chapter 1 Signed
I like that you showed the caring side of Severus and that he is caring for her becase he cares for her and wants to do it, not be cause he feels he owes it to her. He knows what she's done for him, and it's not payback, he wants to give back to her in kind. You have done very well with your English in this so far.

Author's Response: Thank you very much. Yes, Severus isn't acting out of guilt. I'm glad you like it. I will submit the next and last chapter as soon as my beta corrected it!




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