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Reviews for The Unconditional Vow

Daizy Brandon 2008.12.12 - 01:13PM 23: Asphodelus Albus Anonymous
Reviewer: Daizy Brandon Signed Date: 07/11/08 - 05:32 pm Title: Asphodelus Albus very interesting about the Latin name of the Lily. And has other implications as well--especially for Severus.

Author's Response: Yes - weird that it is also Dumbledore's first name. And it seemed so apt as it was an ingredient in the Draught of Living Death.

hexgirl 2008.10.13 - 04:41PM 23: Asphodelus Albus Signed
Meant to review this chapter instead of chapter 11. Anyway great story, so imaginative and utterley believable. I never usually read oc stories, but this one doesn't feel like at all like one. Well done. Don't keep us in suspense for too long.

Author's Response: If it doesn't feel like an OC story, that is high praise indeed - thank you! The next two chapters will be posted very soon; I look forward to your reviews!

johnbly341 2008.10.10 - 12:00AM 23: Asphodelus Albus Signed
I'm really enjoying your story. Your Severus has just the right amount of vulnerability to balance off his acerbic nature. You've done a great job showing the relationship and trust growing between him and Contessa.

Author's Response: Nice to hear from you, and thank you for your review. Hopefully the slow build of the story is starting to bear fruit.

makaem 2008.10.04 - 08:47PM 23: Asphodelus Albus Signed
I love this story. I find myself hoping you have something in mind to save both of them. They both deserve better than the fate I fear awaits them. I know they know what being a member of the Order means, but... It is a beautiful story.

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you are enjoying it.

Rose of the West 2008.10.04 - 04:03PM 23: Asphodelus Albus Signed
Lovely scene. There is some real character development going on there, even in the midst of everything else happening around them.

Author's Response: Thank you. I want to write a credible Severus but also develop him as a character.




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