Reviews for The Unconditional Vow
Daizy Brandon |
2008.12.12 - 01:13PM |
23: Asphodelus Albus |
Anonymous |
Reviewer: Daizy Brandon Signed
Date: 07/11/08 - 05:32 pm Title: Asphodelus Albus
very interesting about the Latin name of the Lily. And has other implications as well--especially for Severus.
Author's Response: Yes - weird that it is also Dumbledore's first name. And it seemed so apt as it was an ingredient in the Draught of Living Death. |
hexgirl |
2008.10.13 - 04:41PM |
23: Asphodelus Albus |
Signed |
Meant to review this chapter instead of chapter 11. Anyway great story, so imaginative and utterley believable. I never usually read oc stories, but this one doesn't feel like at all like one. Well done. Don't keep us in suspense for too long.
Author's Response: If it doesn't feel like an OC story, that is high praise indeed - thank you! The next two chapters will be posted very soon; I look forward to your reviews! |
johnbly341 |
2008.10.10 - 12:00AM |
23: Asphodelus Albus |
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I'm really enjoying your story. Your Severus has just the right amount of vulnerability to balance off his acerbic nature. You've done a great job showing the relationship and trust growing between him and Contessa.
Author's Response: Nice to hear from you, and thank you for your review. Hopefully the slow build of the story is starting to bear fruit. |
makaem |
2008.10.04 - 08:47PM |
23: Asphodelus Albus |
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I love this story. I find myself hoping you have something in mind to save both of them. They both deserve better than the fate I fear awaits them. I know they know what being a member of the Order means, but... It is a beautiful story.
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you are enjoying it. |
Rose of the West |
2008.10.04 - 04:03PM |
23: Asphodelus Albus |
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Lovely scene. There is some real character development going on there, even in the midst of everything else happening around them.
Author's Response: Thank you. I want to write a credible Severus but also develop him as a character. |
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