I liked all of these. Even though they weren't really connected (since they all hinted at different endings), I would have suggested a different order. I'd have put Fire first, since Severus' feelings for Lily Burned earliest of all, back when they were both students. Next,Air, since he was being brought back to life in the Shrieking Shack. I would have put Water third, as his escape from there--though of course, it doesn't quite fit, does it, as he's being rescued by others in "Air", but freeing himself, alone, in "Water". Lastly I would have placed Earth, as it would seem fitting, a quiet close to his story without two masters, just time for himself and his own pursuits. But those were just suggestions--you ARE the author, not me, and I do know that, thank you! Please know how much I enjoyed them, no matter what order they were in. Quite nicely done--and a "10" for you, too. |