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Reviews for A Spy's Fate

Trickie Woo	2008.09.10 - 04:31AM	5: Chapter 5: Induction	Signed
You did say that sparks would fly when she met Severus, and I see you meant it. I'm pretty sure his suspicions will be roused and he will checking around to find out exactly what she's up to in the not too distant future. And to balance that out he'll have to deal with her instant attraction to him, also it seemed to me that by the end of the chapter he was showing a bit of jealousy when Lupin kissed her. I love this line: “Miss Corwin, I thought you were involved with Lupin. How is it your thoughts are on my extreme good looks?” And I love that she called him eye candy to his face. I'm anxiously looking forward to more of those sparks. Author's Response: He was definitely showing some jealousy towards Lupin. He dislikes Lupin and can't see what Bree would see in him. Severus and Bree will get to know each other a little better in the next chapter. ;)

Rose of the West	2008.09.09 - 03:14PM	5: Chapter 5: Induction	Signed
I still don't like the idea of having a mole in the Order, but I did enjoy the conversation with Snape and how they both came away with their calm demeanors a bit ruffled. Author's Response: Ruffled, yes, that's a good way to put it. It's a bit disconcerting to not know what her intentions are in regards to the Order, I'm sure. Thanks for reviewing on both sites. You're so sweet!