Reviews for The Way Home
Rose of the West |
2008.09.08 - 01:27PM |
1: I: Anaesthesia and Coffee |
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Cute lady. Pretty funny about the bloke who turned out all right in the end!
Author's Response: Yeah, isn't she lovely, my little Cassandra? Thanks for reading and leaving a note. /M |
Trickie Woo |
2008.09.05 - 12:47AM |
2: II: Subjects Best Untouched |
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I got called away from my computer when I finished my review for the first chapter and this is the first chance I've had to get back to Chapter 2. I love this statement " He had always been too light for the Dark Side and too tainted for the Light." It expresses his life and everyone's reaction to him so well. I think that Minerva did well by him when she helped him forge a new identity. I'm trying to picture him now, how short is his hair? What I see in my head is the Sheriff of Nottingham, but a little older and with some grey and with shorter better groomed hair. Let's see, she said there was a Severus in her school when she was a schoolgirl, she came to Iceland to study runes, and her family thought she married well beneath her social status. I'm going to guess that she's a pureblood witch, probably a Ravenclaw, and her late husband was a Muggle.
Author's Response: Dear Watson ;-) Your theories made me smile, but I am not going to tell you why ... yet. And yes, I actually did have the Sheriff of Nottingham in mind when describing Dr. Smythe, though better groomed and washed. Thanks for leaving a note. /M |
Trickie Woo |
2008.09.04 - 04:19PM |
1: I: Anaesthesia and Coffee |
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I'm happy to see that it finally showed up here, I've been looking for it since you told me you submitted it. This chapter looks to be the same as what you showed me early this summer, I'll have to see if the next chapter has been changed or added to.
Author's Response: Yeah, I didn't change much in chapter one. But chapter two has been slightly extended. I really hope you'll like it. Cheers. /M |
star_girl |
2008.09.04 - 03:15PM |
2: II: Subjects Best Untouched |
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I have a couple of theories, but I don't want to spoil it. Spoilers suck and it's frustrating as an author, so I'll sit back and see how it unfolds :)
Author's Response: We'll see just how good a detective you are :-) |
star_girl |
2008.09.04 - 02:54PM |
2: II: Subjects Best Untouched |
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Love the line, "He had always been too light for the Dark Side and too tainted for the Light." Let's see what secrets Cassy holds...
Author's Response: Any theories? Thanks for reading and leaving a note. /M |
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