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Reviews for Two Sides Against the Middle

morgaine_dulac 2008.09.11 - 11:49AM 11: Stag Party Signed
This was a very sweet chapter. Thank you for sharing it with us. (Btw, could you please make somebody punch Sirius. Please?) /M

Author's Response: Sirius is about to get a sort of punch to the gut. I'm sure his ego will feel some real pain. ;) I'm not sure about actually punching him...hmm...

morgaine_dulac 2008.09.11 - 11:39AM 10: Mourning Signed
Somehow I always thought that Sirius didn't like Regulus that much. I like your side of the story better though. /M

Author's Response: Based on my own experiences in sibling relations, I think Sirius loves his little brother a lot, but felt a little betrayed that Regulus didn't join him in sticking it to the family.

debjunk 2008.09.11 - 11:33AM 11: Stag Party Signed
Mmm, lovely ending to that chapter. I wonder, will he keep his vow to her and not join the Death Eaters? At least he is up front with her about not loving her. It's a bit like he's using her to forget about Lily, but what they say to each other kind of negates that. I'm not being really eloquent, here. I guess I just mean that I don't mind that he's using her because he's pretty much up front about it, and she knew even before he said, and their attraction kind of outweights it. Whew!

Author's Response: That's sort of the feeling I was going for, so you're telling me I succeeded! Thank you!

debjunk 2008.09.11 - 11:25AM 10: Mourning Signed
It's nice to see Emily stand up for Severus to Sirius.

Author's Response: Thank you! I think her allegiances have pretty much always run that way throughout, at least I've tried to make it that way.

debjunk 2008.09.09 - 08:25PM 9: School Days End Signed
Quite a bit of unacknowleged attraction there. I like the way you are portraying a broken Severus. The man was never all in one piece, was he?

Author's Response: Yeah, Emily knows she's attracted but thinks she should focus elsewhere. Severus has never been heart whole since he met Lily and can't really see what's in front of him.

morgaine_dulac 2008.09.09 - 03:49PM 9: School Days End Signed
This is so sweet. And I don't know if I am supposed to feel bad for Severus or be angry at him for being so stubborn. Thanks for sharing. /M

Author's Response: I think both. We feel so bad for people with these kinds of problems but they're so often self-inflicted. Thanks! Stay tuned!

morgaine_dulac 2008.09.09 - 03:40PM 8: Thoughts and Conversations Signed
Lily wouldn't even have deserved Severus! (I really have to behave myself now, and not go into a anti-Lily-rant!) /M

Author's Response: I truly believe she was a nice enough person and certainly well matched with James, but she just doesn't belong with our Severus. ;) She's a bit self absorbed in her way, for one thing, if she can't see the poor boy's passion for her.

makaem 2008.09.09 - 12:08PM 7: An Immodest Proposal Signed
this is a nice story, very enjoyable read. How many chapters do you have planned?

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm not sure how many chapters this will be. I am planning to end with the Battle of Hogwarts, but there's a lot of time that can be skipped in the middle.

morgaine_dulac 2008.09.08 - 01:57PM 7: An Immodest Proposal Signed
Wow, what an offer. And Severus did not take it? Gee, what a dunderhead ;-) Tell your Muse to hurry, I am very curious about the continuation. /M

Author's Response: Thank you, again! Well, he still wants to be a DE, and there's the whole Lily thing, and he's a bit surprised by the whole premise of the offer, etc, etc. Plus, he's not real good with girls.

morgaine_dulac 2008.09.08 - 01:50PM 6: Seventh Year Begins Signed
Wow, Potter and Black are actually behaving themselves? I am amazed! ;-) Wish Emily would talk some sense into Severus though. Lovely chapter. /M

Author's Response: Supposedly James's head wasn't as big in seventh year and Lily decided she could date him. As James goes, so goes Sirius, to some extent. Meanwhile, Emily finds a way to get Severus's attention. Thank you!

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