Reviews for The Unconditional Vow
Daizy Brandon |
2008.12.12 - 01:16PM |
18: Elephant in the Room |
Anonymous |
Reviewer: Daizy Brandon Signed
Date: 07/11/08 - 04:58 pm Title: Elephant in the Room
Can't help but wonder what was in the potion. Its effect on Contessa reminded me of chamomile. He was trying to calm her with it, yes?
Author's Response: I was thinking along the lines of Valerian root to sedate and Bergamot, which is the citrus note, to calm and relax. But chamomile would have a similar effect, yes. |
makaem |
2008.08.30 - 01:40PM |
18: Elephant in the Room |
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What will the relationship be once he returns to Hogwarts? It makes sense that Dumbledore wouldn't leave Snape totally cut off from the Order of the Phoenix, so will the portrait encourage her to seek him out? I'm looking forward to reading more. As far as a romance developing, I would think Dumbledore would have picked a contact that he felt fairly safe wouldn't get involved with Snape. He couldn't afford to allow any romantic relationships to develop that might interfere with Snape's tasks. But Dumbledore has made mistakes, and a relationship between these two doesn't seem far fetched.
Author's Response: Plot questions will be answered in the next chapter. Your perceptions of Dumbledore are very accurate, but I think he might surprise you later on in the story! Thanks again for your reviews. |
Rose of the West |
2008.08.29 - 10:39AM |
18: Elephant in the Room |
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Are you SURE there's no romance between these two?
I like the way you told us that he found out something without telling us what he learned, too.
Lovely read. Just the right amount of tension to keep it going.
Author's Response: I have just updated my Author information page in an attempt to answer the question of romance. Thanks for your continuing reviews! |
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