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| Bella_Portia | 2009.03.10 - 03:29AM | 1: So Much It Hurts | Signed |
| Excellent view from inside poor Snape's head during those last years of his adolescence, when he was facing Lily day after day and watching her affections change. I love stories that fill in the emotional gaps in the story; and you did a terrific job with this one. Author's Response: Sorry for the extremely late response. Thank you, Bella. I like stories that fill in the gaps, too. Thanks for the kind review. Cheers! | |||
| Lady Whitehart | 2008.08.23 - 05:20PM | 1: So Much It Hurts | Signed |
| It was as if his heart was a compass that constantly pointed in her direction. His mind was like a broken record replaying his memories of her.
I really love these lines! You captured his pain wonderfully well. Author's Response: Thank you so much. Severus really is a tortured soul. I look up to him partially, because his pain is both his strength and his weakness. Thanks for reading and reviewing. Cheers! | |||
| debjunk | 2008.08.20 - 08:23PM | 1: So Much It Hurts | Signed |
| Very intense. I think Severus definitely thought this way for some time after his friendship with Lily ended. Author's Response: Thank you, I am glad you think so. Thanks for reading and reveiwing. Cheers! | |||
| Overhill | 2008.08.19 - 02:03AM | 1: So Much It Hurts | Signed |
| What a pain-filled mood piece! Poor Severus, dealing with the aftermath of his loss of Lily, and never, ever recovering. You handled a delicate subject very well. Thanks for sharing. Author's Response: Thank you so much. This thought popped in my head the other day that Severus had to endure at least a whole year of school after he and Lily went there separate ways and this is what came to me. I'm glad you felt I handled the subject well. Thanks always for the reviews. Cheers! | |||
| scar2d2w | 2008.08.18 - 09:51PM | 1: So Much It Hurts | Signed |
| good start...would like to see more! Author's Response: Thank you. I do have some other Lily/Snape stories on this site that you may like. I will have to ponder this concept and see if I can continue on from this story. Thank you for the review. Cheers! | |||
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