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Reviews for Ensnare the Senses

quarshie 2008.08.14 - 08:44AM 3: Ensnared Signed
it seems that it could be short and good sometimes!!!

Author's Response: Thank you! I do work at getting the most I can from a short piece. I prefer to read longer pieces, but I'm no good at writing them.

morgaine_dulac 2008.07.30 - 11:01AM 3: Ensnared Signed
Very nice. Good idea to let 13 years pass. Makes both of them more grown-up. Thanks for sharing. /M

sevvy 2008.07.30 - 06:02AM 3: Ensnared Signed
Glad to see Chapter 3 is up at last - well done for pursuing it! As I said before this is a great story and the final Chapter does not disappoint! (Hope you got my e-mail in response to yours - thanks again!) On reflection, I think you are right about the 13 year gap - it certainly does make the point even more by having such a long gap. In my experience, once you are infatuated with someone or something it doesn't usually go away any way no matter how much time passes! So glad this was recipricated love in this instance and delighted to see such a happy ending in a story for once! Look forward to seeing more of your work in future.

Author's Response: Many thanks! I did get the email response. I hope to write more soon. I'm one that has to wait for inspiration to come and it comes slowly. Once it does, I work quickly. Here's hoping for inspiration. Thanks again.

Trickie Woo 2008.07.30 - 02:41AM 3: Ensnared Signed
I like the 13 span, it proves your point and it also makes the age difference less of a problem.

Author's Response: Yeah, I wanted her well-established in her career and the meeting to take them both by surprise. Snape is such a great character to write. So much to work with.

Trickie Woo 2008.07.29 - 10:29PM 3: Ensnared Signed
I just checked my review for Ch 2, my guess was correct but my timing was off by 12 years.

Author's Response: LOL! I did want them to have gone on with their lives and just meet by chance. I thought about having it be sooner than 13 years and I may change that, but it isn't really all that important to the story. I just wanted to show her discovering she still carried a torch after all these years. Apparently he did, as well.

Trickie Woo 2008.07.29 - 10:27PM 3: Ensnared Signed
My guess was correct! That was lovely, I enjoyed her fulfilling his fantasy and what came afterwards almost as much as they did themselves.

Rose of the West 2008.07.29 - 08:21PM 3: Ensnared Signed
Wow! That was pretty intense. I could have used a bit more at the very end.

Author's Response: Not sure where else I could go with the end. They have decided to see one another. Let your imagination fill in the blanks....... That way it can end however you like it to.




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