Reviews for Ensnare the Senses
morgaine_dulac |
2008.07.26 - 05:55PM |
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Interesting. Off to read the next chapter. /M
Author's Response: I had to do a bunch of stuff to the second chapter. Made it much better. I will have to do major editing to the last chapter to make it work. |
Trickie Woo |
2008.07.26 - 04:07PM |
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This sounds interesting, now I'm going to read the next chapter to see where you're taking it. Why don't you post Dark Lady here? I think it's well written and won't need much in the way of corrections, if any.
Author's Response: Thank you. I haven't been as happy with Dark Lady as I could be. I've made a few alterations. I'm not happy with the way the last chapter reads. Want to think on it for awhile. |
Rose of the West |
2008.07.25 - 01:02PM |
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It's not clear exactly what is going on, but hopefully there will be more?
Author's Response: Needed this very short first chapter to set the stage. |
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