Reviews for A Kind Of Magic
Trickie Woo |
2008.08.06 - 09:39PM |
8: Chapter 8 |
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It may be getting harder and harder to write, but it is getting better and better to read. His life would have been a lot easier if he had thought about things logically first before he ever said anything; but if had had just done that with Sarah she may not have lost her temper and he wouldn't have seen that her magic is real.
Author's Response: Once again, thank you, that's so kind! Snape's usual mask slipped as the reality of being bound and impending exile sunk in, and the feeling of love ruffled his feathers and felt to him as intrusive as legilimency. Poor guy! |
Elaine Lahey |
2008.08.06 - 04:55PM |
8: Chapter 8 |
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That's right Snape. Yell and scream at the woman you just had great sex with and who vanished the Dark Mark on your arm. Gee, Sir, can we go on a second date? LOL! Well written.
Author's Response: Lol, it was going too well wasn't it? ;-) |
Elaine Lahey |
2008.08.05 - 05:43PM |
7: Chapter 7 |
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What a charming story! I love stories where Snape gets the love he deserves. I suppose soon he will introduce his new lady to Hogwarts so she can see the "university" for herself?
Well done indeed.
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Author's Response: The path of true love never did run smoothly! Thanks for reading. |
Stella Stargazer |
2008.08.05 - 12:37PM |
7: Chapter 7 |
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Very much enjoying your writing, your Wiccan practitioner and, of course, your version of Severus. More soon, please?
Author's Response: Thank you very much, I can't tell you how much I appreciate everyone's support and kind words. I am a total novice, and a novice without a beta (I guess that just makes me a fool!)
Chapter 8 is up and awaiting approval. Chapter 9 however is going to be a real pain in the You-Know-What to write so may take a little longer! :) |
pitwitch |
2008.08.04 - 09:36PM |
7: Chapter 7 |
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I found no offense in the ritual, lol. I don't think Severus did either. Quite enjoyable reading. His Mark is gone, eh? Hmmmm ... a mystery.
Author's Response: Thanks for sticking with it! x |
pitwitch |
2008.08.04 - 09:30PM |
6: Chapter 6 |
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Ch 6. Enhance his knowledge, indeed. Enhace a few other things as well.
Author's Response: Snigger! |
magpie79 |
2008.08.04 - 03:26PM |
7: Chapter 7 |
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the most difficult chapter? it was definatly worth it! sex can be hard to write well, but you've done a great job.
xxx
Author's Response: Thank you so much, that means a lot! xxx |
Trickie Woo |
2008.08.04 - 02:32PM |
7: Chapter 7 |
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Well, it was a lot more than the thorough shagging he was expecting. It removed his dark mark, so it must be just as valid as the wizarding world's magic. I went back through the chapters to check the time frame and realized I totally forgot about the way she praised his wand and how he accepted her compliments. You are a true master of the double entendre.
Author's Response: Why thank you :) There are also other clues about why her magic is as valid as the wizarding worlds in the story... I won't say too much, it'll all become clear. Thanks for sticking with it! |
Trickie Woo |
2008.08.01 - 02:17PM |
6: Chapter 6 |
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They sound a bit like Red Ridng Hood and the Big Bad Wolf, but I'm not sure exactly who is Red Riding Hood and who is the Big Bad Wolf. I think Severus is in for a lot more than just the thorough shagging he thinks he will be getting
Author's Response: I think you may be right ;) |
Trickie Woo |
2008.08.01 - 02:55AM |
5: Chapter 5 |
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It may have been a difficult chpter to write, but I love how she came right to the point. I wonder if Severus knew anything about Hieros Gamos before? The Death Eater rituals seem as if they would have their own version to bind a woman. I'm sure he will have full knowledge of it by morning though.
Author's Response: I have no doubt the Death Eaters would have horrific versions of sex magic, whether a binding spell or something else. Severus would be aware of these kinds of Dark Magic, but he still thinks he's dealing with a Muggle who got lucky; in his mind, the only reason her magic worked was because it was tinged with his own... foolish Severus!
Thanks for reading, and thanks for reviewing! :) |
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