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Reviews for The Unconditional Vow

hexgirl 2008.10.13 - 04:37PM 11: Dangerous Game Signed
Just found your story and had to tell how much I am loving it. It works so well with the canon, and maybe it is because you have it so canon compatible that Snape seems so in character. I always wondered about what was going on in Snape's life while the trio were off horcrux hunting. Thanks for a great story, can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: Welcome, and thank you very much! Snape is in character largely due to the efforts of my two beta-readers, to whom I owe a great deal.

inverness 2008.07.24 - 06:43AM 11: Dangerous Game Signed
Really great story!Though I hardly dare to continue reading because I fear ,you will let him die too in the end,will you?No hope?

Author's Response: Thank you! The ending will be canon and therefore bittersweet. However, I will post a warning at the point in the story where those who want a happy ending can choose to stop reading! Then you can decide for yourself how it ends...How does that sound?

Daizy Brandon 2008.07.20 - 04:41PM 11: Dangerous Game Signed
Great building of suspense. You are also very in tune with Severus's true emotions. Nice work. Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Yes, well, my betas keep my feet firmly on the ground and Severus in canon character, so my thanks goes to them!

johnbly341 2008.07.19 - 09:35PM 11: Dangerous Game Signed
Outstanding story! I just "discovered" your story yesterday and have read it pretty much straight through. I normally don't like OC stories but you've definitely hooked me with this one. Excellent job with your characterization of Snape and, as someone else said, I'm really enjoying his perceptions of canon events. I can't wait for your next chapeter!

Author's Response: Thank you very much indeed. I know what you mean about OC stories; I've deliberately tried to avoid some of the common pitfalls. Looks like my strategy has worked for you! Glad to have you along for the ride.

greenwood 2008.07.18 - 10:40PM 11: Dangerous Game Signed
Really good chapter! The ending, with the Muggle studies teacher being executed was really well done. You captured cannon and added what we (Snape fans) wanted to hear behind the scenes - that is - what Severus was feeling and thinking. I look forward to more.

Author's Response: I really enjoyed exploring Severus's thoughts and feelings in this canon situation. It is a testament to JKR's craftsmanship that the scene could be turned on its head to allow this interpretation. Glad you enjoyed it!

Rose of the West 2008.07.18 - 11:09AM 11: Dangerous Game Signed
It's nice to see this scene from Snape's POV. It never occured to me before, but it's interesting that Charity thinks Severus might help her, only weeks after he's killed Dumbledore.

Author's Response: Yes, and interesting that she doesn't expect help from Draco. Possibly due to a rush of blood to the head!

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