Reviews for The Old Walls Crumble
Elaine Lahey |
2010.12.06 - 12:31PM |
18: Love revealed |
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A great story. Thanks for finishing it. |
Jong_Kahn |
2010.10.06 - 12:04AM |
18: Love revealed |
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I take it this is the end of this particular story. Very well done! A chapter or so back in the author's notes there was mention of an epilogue or another chapter or two. Since it's over three years later, you should simply amend this to "completed". After all, your story is told; if you should ever wish to add more, you can make a little one- or two-shot sequel. But you did a nice job with this. I especially liked their hand-fasting ceremony. If I could give you "30", I would. Thanks for all your hard work. |
johnbly341 |
2008.07.20 - 03:46PM |
18: Love revealed |
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Very enjoyable story! I'm not usually a big fan of "romantic Severus" but I really like your story, which is a nice mixture of drama and romance.
Author's Response: Thank you, glad you enjoyed. |
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