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Reviews for The Unconditional Vow

Daizy Brandon 2008.07.20 - 04:16PM 9: A New Memory Signed
Oh, the sweetness of the "close your eyes" plea. The tension mounts. . . Loving your creativity, and the picture you are painting in the cottage and the garden.

Author's Response: Yes, I shuddered when I wrote it :-D Sweet dreams...

tigerlily2 2008.07.06 - 01:30AM 9: A New Memory Signed
Very nice! Thank you for posting this story. I wish this site had an update feature (to email people when something is updated). Thanks again!

Author's Response: Cheers! If you want to send me an email address, I would be happy to email you each time I add a chapter.

Rose of the West 2008.07.01 - 11:48AM 9: A New Memory Signed
I'm loving this story. I hope you continue it.

Author's Response: Thanks for your encouragement. Next chapter is on its way.

Muse22 2008.06.27 - 02:59PM 9: A New Memory Signed
Oh wow. I could just visualize that part. It gave me shivers, imagining Alan-as-Snape being that close.....Sorry, drifted there for a moment. ;) Great chapter.

Author's Response: Haha! Yeah, I admit I wrote that deliberately for the Rickmaniacs. It's hard to keep things platonic when that velvety voice is whispering in your ear...

greenwood 2008.06.26 - 11:47AM 9: A New Memory Signed
This story is developing so very nicely. You have Severus in cannon character and I just love Contessa. She is a great match for him (she reminds me of what Lily might have been like). I thought that the ring idea was simple and wonderful and solved the immediate problem of the funeral and has the potential of coming into play later at a critical moment (I can't wait for how you will use it). I also like how you are weaving cannon story into this one and making it all fit so well. Your writing style is intellegent and full of depth. I am enjoying this story so much and look forward to more! Great job!!

Author's Response: Thank you very much; I am really pleased you're enjoying it. Severus being in canon character is the best compliment I could hope for, as I want him to be himself and not change for my purposes. You have motivated me to continue! Cheers!

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