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Reviews for The Moment It Began

kittylefish 2008.06.16 - 01:39PM 12: Chapter Twelve Signed
it was so sad watching him take his mother to the hospital, even though it was necessary. this story is definitely bittersweet at the moment. i do hope he manages to make things turn out better this time. the last sentence seemed kind of hopeful.

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! Yes, this is a sad moment and time in their lives.

morgaine_dulac 2008.06.13 - 03:23PM 12: Chapter Twelve Signed
The last paragraph actually made me sniffle a little. It's very simple and at the same time very beautiful. And I know that I am a terribly cynic person, but I still have the feeling that something bad is about to happen and the there just won't be a happy ending. Please, prove me wrong. Thanks for sharing. /M

Author's Response: Thank you! Aw, I'm sorry it made you a bit sad! :(




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