Reviews for Into the Fold
testingt |
2008.06.09 - 04:43AM |
21: Persuasion |
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Oh, god. You write a Voldemort who's good at seduction.
In one of my fictions, I had Severus reflect years later, "Was there anyone who had gotten what they sought in joining? Save Bella and her ilk, of course. For anyone sane—whatever you sought in joining the Dark Lord, that’s what you lost, you paid …."
So of course. It makes perfect sense. Voldie enslaves Severus by offering him freedom.
Wish you'd written this before I'd done mine! I might have to rewrite in response...
And what a cliffie.
To think I'd been looking forward to this update, you evil being.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Snape's in for a mighty disillusionment, which will be fun (so to speak!) to write about. No need to rewrite yours, though, I'd think, unless you'd have fun doing it or you really think it would be improved.
I'm working on the next chapter, and I think I can already assure you Severus will survive! |
morgaine_dulac |
2008.06.07 - 07:59AM |
21: Persuasion |
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This was certainly worth the wait. I love your version of the relationship between Severus and his mother. And your Voldemort is certainly darker than Rowling's ever was. Looking forward to he next chapter. Thanks for sharing. /M
Author's Response: Thank you! Sorry it took so long--RL has steamrollered me in the past few weeks. |
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