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Reviews for The Man With the Missing Past

alicebs	2008.05.26 - 02:15AM	6: Chapter Six	Signed
This story was good, and it is getting better and better! Snape is recovering his memories, little by little, and now someone from the wizarding world has recognised him! Author's Response: Thanks very much, alicebs, I hope you continue to enjoy the story.

LaBibliographe	2008.05.24 - 10:13PM	6: Chapter Six	Signed
"Nemo's" first foray outside the hospital and he's almost gutted. I didn't know he had his wand. I'm surprised that the people who picked him up even kept it for him (if they saw it at all). I need a fanwank on this. He's let Jemima sees his 'difference' and scrounged through her mind. Did he see she fancied him? Oooh, who is coming toward him? Who recognizes him? An evil cliffie. Poor Jemima, slidng down that slippery slope toward the bottom where we are all languishing. Snape-o-philes caught in his mesmerizing web. I wonder if I would still think he was so exciting if he had the voice of Mickey Mouse? He IS compelling to look at - it may be the nose for me. Great chapter, advancing us toward his real world - slowly. I wonder how Jemima will fit in? LaBib Author's Response: In chapter 2 Jemima and her consultant discuss the 2 items found on his person - his wand and a bezoar - and then Jemima is encouraged to give them back to him, to see if they jog his memory. I don't think canon ever explains where Snape keeps his wand, but I always assumed it was up his sleeve somewhere, and would have been there at the time of the confrontation with Voldemort. (Somehow I don't think the Mickey Mouse voice would work the same magic!!)

greenwood	2008.05.24 - 07:25PM	6: Chapter Six	Signed
AH you had him recognized! I wonder what that will lead too! He could be thrown into Azkaban for pretrial knowing the Ministry. Gads this is good! My only wish is that the chapters were coming faster! I can't wait till you post the next one. Author's Response: There are many more possibilities with an alive Snape than a dead one - if only certain writers agreed with us!

Scary Bear Hair

2008.05.24 - 02:23AM

6: Chapter Six

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Squeee! This is soo good! I loved the way Snape took care of that asshat. He was just so masterful. *swoon* I think Jemima felt the same way too.

She is now onto his secret though. It sounds like she is thoroughly confounded too. It must be the most exhilarating ride of her life. I mean I know it would be for me. lol

You have left us with a cliffhanger though. Who has just recognized him I wonder?

Excellent chapter Shez! I don’t know if I can wait till your next post.

Author's Response: Next post is here - and you will find out who the mystery girl is.