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Reviews for A More Merciful Man

d_monica 2008.05.26 - 01:08AM 49: Iced Tea Signed
just fucking brilliant!

trixee 2008.05.17 - 09:06PM 49: Iced Tea Signed
I was super happy to find an update to this story... and like some of the other readers suggested Sev needs to embrace fatherhood...

Author's Response: The fatherhood chapter is coming, but Severus is very much against it. As he's only a literary character I am immune to his curses (not that he hasn't tried), but I'm not immune to his bellowing. It will take a bit to convince him.

magpie79 2008.05.15 - 02:16PM 49: Iced Tea Signed
wow, such a great chapter! it was so worth the wait, I hope this is not the last we'll see of these two.

ard 2008.05.15 - 11:41AM 49: Iced Tea Signed
Great chapter, as always. And I agree with LInda0506. I have thought for sometime now what a hoot it would be to see Severus become a dad! I could only imagine that delivery scene! Please?

celestialrain 2008.05.14 - 11:12PM 49: Iced Tea Signed
A long wait, but so worth it!! What a wonderful chapter. Ahh, the power of a woman! At this moment, I'm fairly irritated to be single! You write beautifully and have such a finely tuned sense of humor. I loved it! More, please......

linda0506 2008.05.14 - 03:05PM 49: Iced Tea Signed
I love this story, and your writing. It would be nice if Jane and Severus could have a baby now. Just a thought...

wieden1 2008.05.14 - 02:19AM 49: Iced Tea Signed
thank you for the wonderful chapter, i liked how they were spending the day - with severus coming to realistation that he is married (like with the ring) until the very well written end! all in all very romantic and cute and still believable. i also hope for another chapter!

darka 2008.05.13 - 05:21PM 49: Iced Tea Signed
Wow! I could say more but nothing to do it justice. I get why it took you so long, it's perfect

Ellyn 2008.05.13 - 02:22PM 49: Iced Tea Signed
Thank you for a wonderful chapter. Jane really understands Severus, doesn't she? I can't wait to find out how Eva, Lucius, and the others react to the news.

Trickie Woo 2008.05.13 - 02:12PM 49: Iced Tea Signed
It seemed like a long wait, but it was worth it. I don't know how you manage it, but you manage to make double entendres and what would be considered crude sexual terms in any other context seem like the most romantic words in the English language. From his toast to Minerva to the consummation at the end, this was a funny, frustrating, and ultimately very satisfying chapter and very worth the wait.

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