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Reviews for The Man With the Missing Past

greenwood	2008.05.18 - 05:54PM	3: Chapter Three	Signed
I loved Severus' reaction to the "stick and the stone"! So clasic and so snarky. I also like how you have Jemima really caring about him underneath it all. She doesn't what him to be faking...she wants him to be a real case - however cranky.

merino	2008.05.12 - 02:06AM	3: Chapter Three	Signed
Can't wait to see how this ends up! Author's Response: Thanks, merino - keep reading!

Scary Bear Hair	2008.05.07 - 12:02AM	3: Chapter Three	Signed
By the way, I meant, I think our snarky professor is starting to grow on Ms Pepperdine. Please forgive my error, I could not delete it or fix it. :-(

Scary Bear Hair

2008.05.06 - 11:59PM

3: Chapter Three

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Oooo, I think are snarky professor is starting to grow on Ms Pepperdine. (or should I be calling her Dr. Pepperdine) As always I love your dialog. And I don’t think I told you, but I love the idea of Snape surviving too.

It looks like Snape has kept his personality in tact because I don’t see him as being happy-go-lucky either. :D

Anyway this was a pretty short chapter, but I am looking forward to more adventures of Jemima and Nemo. Lol

Keep up the great work.

Author's Response: Thanks - she's a consultant, so she'd be Ms Pepperdine (don't ask me why though!). I'm pleased you think Snape is in character; that's always my first concern.