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Reviews for The Man With the Missing Past

greenwood 2008.05.18 - 05:47PM 2: Chapter Two Signed
Very very good second chapter! You really have Severus down to the snarkiest detail. I loved the discription of his eys and his voice. I felt that I was there next to Jemima listening to him "slice and dice" away.

Author's Response: Thanks for all your reviews, greenwood - yes, 'snarky, brilliant and passionate' - I was excited by the idea of Snape laid bare, without the bitter layers of his past. I thought he'd be far more attractive than Rowling ever gave him credit for!

SweetSnapess 2008.05.04 - 02:29AM 2: Chapter Two Signed
I really love the premise of your story. It is well developed and creative, just like your character. Please post more soon!

Author's Response: Thanks - hopefully chapter 3 will be up soon.

Scary Bear Hair 2008.05.02 - 11:05AM 2: Chapter Two Signed
Hahaha--well it looks like Snape must be feeling better if he is already being snarky. In his defense though, I’m sure that would irritate him a lot to have no memory. I had to laugh at the Psychologist trying to empathize with Snape. He’s really not the, “get in touch with your feelings” kind of guy, after all. I bet she won’t try that again. Jemima Pepperdine sounds a bit uptight. I get the feeling she has spent her whole life studying medicine and isn’t used to dating men. Then here is Snape, who really gets under her skin. It’s so funny. I love it! This is excellent Shez. I am so looking forward to the next chapter!

Author's Response: I imagine it would drive him round the bend to have no memory! And to be in a situation over which he has no control. It would be upsetting for anyone, but for him, it would be quite intolerable, I think.

LaBibliographe 2008.05.01 - 07:21PM 2: Chapter Two Signed
I had to go through a few hoops to be able to review, so I'm a little behind. Chapters 1-2: Little Miss Pepperdine is a starchy, uptight, reclusive, standoffish...hmm, she sounds a bit like Snape. Snape is his ascerbic self - I guess even profound amnesia doesn't change the basic personality (of course I don't think I'd like to read about a sweet, gentle, kind Snape (it just wouldn't be Snape then). Snape seems interested in her, but I wonder why. He perked up when she entered, so he must have liked her looks. Do we know what she looks like? Mysteries - how did Snape get where he was found? Why does he have amnesia? Was he reading Jemima's mind? Did he think that was normal if he WAS reading her mind? He must be getting tiny dribs and drabs of memory if he came up with the word 'muggle'. Most important, will you tell us when you update this story? Great start to this story. I'm intrigued about what will happen to Snape and how his relationship with Jemima progresses (although at this point he's too good for her).

Author's Response: Jemima has been unlucky in love, which does inform her interpersonal relationships rather a lot! I did a bit of reading around this kind of amnesia, and apparently it is only the personal details of life that are lost - general knowledge about the world, skills etc. largely remain. I'll let you know when the next chapter is up - great to hear from you here; thanks for jumping through those hoops xx.




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