Reviews for The Man With the Missing Past
star_girl |
2008.08.21 - 08:24AM |
1: Chapter One |
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What a first chapter! Off to chapter 2 straight away! |
javoher |
2008.05.29 - 12:52AM |
1: Chapter One |
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Very cool fic, very interesting! I really like Jemima. Look forward to more!
Author's Response: Thanks, javoher - it's a challenge to write an OFC who is 'real' and likeable so I really appreciate your comment. |
greenwood |
2008.05.17 - 12:45AM |
1: Chapter One |
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Ooo! I really like this opening chapter. It really sucks you in. So many questions (how did he get out of the shack..etc.) and such a opening for Severus to "discover" life before he remembers his old one! I look forward to reading the rest of what has been posted. |
Scary Bear Hair |
2008.05.01 - 01:43AM |
1: Chapter One |
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Wow! What a great start! In fact you’ve already got me completely sucked me in. I actually had been meaning to read this story when it was posted on FanFiction, but then I forgot about it. Sorry about that. :(
I shall follow you now though. It looks like a real intriguing idea too. I want to cheat and go over to Fanfiction to see what happens in chapter 2, like Trickie Woo did, but I will wait. I like reading stories in serialized fashion anyway. Weird huh? Also I don’t have to have smut. I mean you are one hell of a storyteller, so I still think it will be great!
Author's Response: Hey, thanks, Scary - and I appreciate your not 'cheating' ;). |
Trickie Woo |
2008.04.29 - 01:36PM |
1: Chapter One |
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It's good to see you here Shez. Just as i predicted, I'll bet you had no problems getting this posted. This is very different from the rest of your Snape stories and very intriguing because of that. Personality wise, I think Jemima and 'Patient X' have a lot in common. She will find out soon enough just what and then know why Dr. Okenedo thought she would be the best one for the job. Will the rating change? You know what I like about your stories and a C rating doesn't cover that at all.
Author's Response: Hey, Trickie Woo, I can always rely on you for a prompt review - thanks very much! I actually wrote this very shortly after Deathly Hallows, because I had to find a way to mentally 'resurrect' Snape in order to find the will to carry on with my other stories. There won't be smut, I fear, but there will be some snark and fun and romance. |
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