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| greenwood | 2008.05.17 - 12:45AM | 1: Chapter One | Signed |
| Ooo! I really like this opening chapter. It really sucks you in. So many questions (how did he get out of the shack..etc.) and such a opening for Severus to "discover" life before he remembers his old one! I look forward to reading the rest of what has been posted. | |||
| LaBibliographe | 2008.05.16 - 06:26PM | 5: Chapter Five | Signed |
| Ooops, I spoke too soon. We got a nice rear view of a black jeans clad male butt and white shirt. Thanks for that. The song with the word 'dark' stirred a memory. Each day brings a bit of togetherness that wasn't there before. I do think the mean woman who wants to get rid of him should be given another job. She obviously hasn't the temperament for this one. What does 'Obs' mean?
LaBib Author's Response: 'Obs' is Observations, the blood pressure, temp etc. that nurses have to take every so often (deliberately vague here because I'm not at all a medical expert, ahem). | |||
| LaBibliographe | 2008.05.16 - 06:17PM | 4: Chapter Four | Signed |
| Ah, Jemima is already starting to succumb to the dark carnality of her patient. His voice alone could attract a convent of nuns. (Hmm, that mightn't be too difficult given their usual fare.) Poor Jemima, fishing for sexual information and caught immediately by a man who perhaps can't remember anything, but was never anyone's stooge. Will we see him in those clothes she's bought him? LaBib | |||
| Scary Bear Hair | 2008.05.16 - 01:47AM | 5: Chapter Five | Signed |
| You know, I have to be very careful with my reviews on this site, otherwise they just get garbled all together into one big jumble, like my last review. And you can’t fix them either. Eeek! But anyway, this was another lovely chapter. I get the feeling Jemima’s dream is a prophecy of some sort. I always think you capture Snape so perfectly. It’s obvious he his becoming quite fond of Jamima. I was laughing too, with all the nurses wanting to throw him out. I have no doubt, Snape would be the worst patient in the world. I’ve never heard the song by the Jam. You should post it if it’s available.
Anyway I am looking forward to their little day trip to the castle. Great job, as always!
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| Stella Stargazer | 2008.05.15 - 02:53PM | 5: Chapter Five | Signed |
| I'm enjoying this story very much. Since we all know our Potions Master is very clever and cagey, I'm wondering if he really has amnesia at all. I don't know a thing about clinical amnesia, but he could be faking....he seems to remember some things (ie - what a bezoar is).....Hmmmmm Author's Response: I've read about amnesia cases where they can remember everything they've learned, but nothing they've experienced - so for instance reading and driving would be fine, but they wouldn't recognise their children. I guess Snape would be the same with magic. | |||
| Scary Bear Hair | 2008.05.14 - 01:47PM | 4: Chapter Four | Signed |
| LOL – I love it, she’s already buying clothes for him. Obviously she’s hooked! :D Snape is so funny though. “He clearly never wore them then. They’re pristine.” Ooo, I love “Mr Blue Sky,” please tell me why! Of course my favorite song by ELO is “Fire in the Sky!” I like ABBA too. lol I love all their little chitchats. I get the feeling Snape is learning more about her, then she is of him. Lovely Chapter!!! :D | |||
| pitwitch | 2008.05.12 - 06:52PM | 4: Chapter Four | Signed |
| ABBA? Snape remembers ABBA ... now there's an association I couldn't ever have imagined!
Thanks for sharing, PItt Author's Response: I couldn't resist the idea of Snape as an ABBA fan - though I think it might have been somebody else that introduced him to their genius. | |||
| Lopie2 | 2008.05.12 - 05:33PM | 4: Chapter Four | Signed |
| I'm hooked on your story. I like your Jemima. I can see a lovely romance between Severus and her. Author's Response: Thanks - you know, I think I can see the same thing...;). | |||
| merino | 2008.05.12 - 02:06AM | 3: Chapter Three | Signed |
| Can't wait to see how this ends up! Author's Response: Thanks, merino - keep reading! | |||
| Scary Bear Hair | 2008.05.07 - 12:02AM | 3: Chapter Three | Signed |
| By the way, I meant, I think our snarky professor is starting to grow on Ms Pepperdine. Please forgive my error, I could not delete it or fix it. :-( | |||
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