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LaBibliographe 2008.06.28 - 05:07PM 11: Chapter Eleven Signed
Chapter 11: What is a full fry? (What idiot said, 'ignorance is bliss'?)
So Snape is now mentioning marriage. To give him credit, I think that was what he meant all along, when he invited her to go into his world. So funny, his change into Jemima/Snape. It seems so natural that someone changing would have balance and movement problems. If their brains had been changed, too, then their memories would be from the other person, and they might not know why they had swallowed the polyjuice. Very confusing overall. I'm surprised he didn't peek at more than his clothed figure with the perfect chance he has. Why did Hermione claim to know Snape was dead? Did you cover that already? It seems familiar, but my reading is stretched over time and my memory isn't recalling what I need, if I did know. Apparently, the entire wizarding world wrote Snape off, even though he had served them against Voldemort. Now that appears to be pretty much canon. His meeting with Harry should be fascinating. This story is great on so many levels - memory loss, mysterious recovery, a slowly evolving love affair, and now Snape's re-entry into his world to find out what and who he was in the detail he needs to survive there. Harry just better treat him right, that's all I have to say. Or else!!

LaBibliographe 2008.06.28 - 04:45PM 10: Chapter Ten Signed
Chapteer 10: Are you partial to custard and do you hate spam fritters?? I guess no one could claim Snape was precipitate in his wooing, but he progressed just at the speed the fearful Jemima needed. Do we know that he has no one waiting (i.e., is this canon that far)? I can see Snape performing his recipes in his lab - he would be utterly graceful in his cutting, measuring, gutting, dicing, stirring, tasting. Authors don't dwell nearly enough on the way he would look as he 'cooked'. I found it interesting that he had the memory of his tattoo. I wonder where, if anywhere, that info will take us?

LaBibliographe 2008.06.28 - 04:15PM 9: Chapter Nine Signed
Chapter 9: Severus is so cute, his starchy, clumsy responses to Jemima's worries about her looks was so sweet. And she really gets him and his lack of social skills. For Jemima's first time apparating and being thrown into the magic world she's doing marvelously well. I just hope Snape isn't found out in his disguise. Is he merely replenishing his stock of ingredients or is he going to make something specific?

Scary Bear Hair 2008.06.24 - 02:52AM 10: Chapter Ten Signed
I love how you have brought Jemima and Snape slowly together. You really do have a matter-of-fact way of writing romance that makes my heart melt.

I was laughing at the Spam fritters. Are those popular in the UK? Most people shutter at the idea of Spam anything over here. LOL

Lovely chapter though Shez!

A hob is a stove burner, right?


greenwood 2008.06.23 - 06:48PM 10: Chapter Ten Signed
Oh I loved the ending! Well we know he has no "ties" but there could be other reasons that may keep him from coming back to her (self loathing for being a murder for one and then there is/was? his love for Lily that could get in the way...) I can't wait to see where this story is going to go. It is really good!

aramintasnape 2008.06.21 - 07:23AM 10: Chapter Ten Signed
I'm really enjoying this so far! Looking forward to seeing what happens next.

NoxSomnium 2008.06.20 - 03:49PM 10: Chapter Ten Signed
Squeak! Aw. He's so sweet! It'll be sad once all that traditional Snape self-loathing comes back. Hopefully it won't take him too long to get past that. Having this time with her without all those past issues in the way will probably have been good for him, although he won't want to tell her. I will wait patiently (sort of) to find out.

NoxSomnium 2008.06.20 - 03:38PM 9: Chapter Nine Signed
I had wondered for a moment if the magic folk would think Severus looked a bit too much like Albus. I'm assuming you let his subconscious come up with that particular glamoured look :) Of course, they aren't home yet... I'll just have to keep going and see.

linda0506 2008.06.14 - 03:55PM 10: Chapter Ten Signed
Ah, nice.I hope that when Severus regains his memory he will be able to let the past go and make a new life with Jemima.

pitwitch 2008.06.12 - 09:21PM 9: Chapter Nine Signed
I'm loving it! Thanks so much for sharing. Cauldron shopping, and who might they just run into there?

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