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Reviews for The Unconditional Vow

snapesgirl21 2008.05.26 - 10:24PM 5: Malfoy Manor Signed
Loved the chapter. I'm really looking forward to see how our beloved Snape treats Contessa and to learn more about Contessa.

Author's Response: I'm really pleased that you are still reading (and reviewing!). Yes, you would like to think that Snape might be a little nicer from now on...

lostsoul27 2008.05.26 - 03:15PM 5: Malfoy Manor Signed
Well, it seems that Severus is in good with Voldemort- that's very, very good for his continued health!! Interesting conversation... I wonder who Contessa's fiance was? I hope you will not wait very long to reveal who it was... lovely chapter, I am looking forward to the next!

Author's Response: Thank you, and no: you won't be waiting very long. The next chapter is on its way!

Daizy Brandon 2008.05.19 - 05:57PM 4: The Vow Signed
Tess seems to be enjoying Snape's company in spite of herself. Wonderful. Great dinner scene and lovely that she purchased clothes for him. Looking forward to more. . .

Author's Response: She won't stay comfortable for too long, though! It is Snape, after all :-)

Daizy Brandon 2008.05.19 - 05:55PM 3: The Portrait Signed
Things are moving along beautifully. I love the fact that Fawkes has made an appearance and the hot chocolate was a nice touch, too. I tend to pick out small things when I read, but they are the things that stick out to me most when remembering the mood of the story. Very nice work. . .

Author's Response: I adore Fawkes and couldn't resist the opportunity to include him. When I write I tend to visualise the scene in my mind and then try to describe it how I see it. It obviously works for you -thank you!

greenwood 2008.05.18 - 07:32PM 4: The Vow Signed
Really good story. I enjoy how you have set up the circumstances for this unlikely relationship. I can't wait to see what developes. I look forward to the next installment.

Author's Response: Thank you! There was a lot of forward planning before the pen went anywhere near the paper!

lostsoul27 2008.05.15 - 04:37PM 4: The Vow Signed
Well, they seem to have at the very least called a truce! That's an interesting Vow Contessa took- very involved, and a bit risky. I wonder why Dumbledore wanted such a detailed Vow? Wouldn't she die if something happened to Severus while he was out with the Death Eaters? Or does it only apply to keeping him safe from the Order? Anyhow, lovely story, can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: I would love to answer your questions, but if I did it would give a lot of the story away. So, my apologies! But, I will say that all of your points are very perceptive and valid...

ghost owl 2008.05.14 - 08:26PM 4: The Vow Signed
The more I read, the more I find this story interesting :) I hope you'll update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you again! I hope to update a chapter a week at the moment; feel free to click on my author bio for more info on the story.

ghost owl 2008.05.14 - 08:04PM 1: Grimmauld Place Signed
This's an interesting and promising opening! I like when we can see what the books didn't properly show about Snape's moments =) ps I could be wrong, but about the phrase "Snape strode down the hall, past the elephant’s foot umbrella stand", well, wasn't it a troll's foot? I can't access to the lexicon in this moment, so I can't control, but...

Author's Response: Thank you for your positive comments, and you are absolutely right, it was actually a troll's leg umbrella stand. I wrote the first few chapters on holiday and didn't have the books with me, and didn't think to check it upon my return. Anyway, I have amended the text now. Cheers!

snapesgirl21 2008.05.13 - 07:35PM 4: The Vow Signed
Great chapter. I love the detail of the vow Contessa took and Severus' reaction to her. Great job!

Author's Response: Thank you and I am glad you have enjoyed it so far. I'm sure Severus will make it hard for her to keep her vow, knowing him...

lostsoul27 2008.05.05 - 10:31PM 3: The Portrait Signed
So Dumbledore is still manipulating people even though he is dead? I can't wait to see how Contessa and Severus interact after that conversation with Dumbledore! Keep up the good work, and I look forward to the next chapter!

Author's Response: I love how Dumbledore turns out not to be whiter-than-white in The Deathly Hallows. The Master of exploitation is at it again! Thank you for your kind comments.

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