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Reviews for The Unconditional Vow

greenwood 2008.06.26 - 11:47AM 9: A New Memory Signed
This story is developing so very nicely. You have Severus in cannon character and I just love Contessa. She is a great match for him (she reminds me of what Lily might have been like). I thought that the ring idea was simple and wonderful and solved the immediate problem of the funeral and has the potential of coming into play later at a critical moment (I can't wait for how you will use it). I also like how you are weaving cannon story into this one and making it all fit so well. Your writing style is intellegent and full of depth. I am enjoying this story so much and look forward to more! Great job!!

Author's Response: Thank you very much; I am really pleased you're enjoying it. Severus being in canon character is the best compliment I could hope for, as I want him to be himself and not change for my purposes. You have motivated me to continue! Cheers!

Muse22 2008.06.13 - 05:41PM 8: Close My Eyes Signed
Quite a wonderful chapter. I liked his response to the funeral. I can only imagine the guilt and anger he is feeling towards Dumbledore, but he is still doing his job.

Author's Response: Thank you. My betas did a sterling job for me on this chapter, by reminding me how nasty Snape can be when he is emotional. Glad to have him back!

Daizy Brandon 2008.06.13 - 03:49AM 8: Close My Eyes Signed
Great playfulness in the second half of the chapter. Contessa is persistent. She will need to stay that way to break Severus's hard exterior, I fear. But, hey, it's definitely worth the challenge.

Author's Response: Hehe! I'm glad you agree! And Severus will remain a challenge for a good while, I suspect...

Daizy Brandon 2008.06.13 - 03:39AM 7: Tiger's Eye Signed
Ah, they are growing closer. I love that he is having feelings (positive ones, at that) in spite of himself. Wonderful creativity with the charms and the fact that it is a tiger's eye is also great. I wear some of those stones on occasion. Nice work.

Author's Response: Yeah, it *had* to be tiger's eye; it fitted on so many levels. And, indeed, Severus with feelings, what a beautiful thing to behold...

Daizy Brandon 2008.06.13 - 03:28AM 6: Thread of Hope Signed
The rings are a nice touch. I love the idea that if both Contessa and Severus are wearing one, they will be connected in some way, even if it's just temporary.

Author's Response: Thank you. The rings are my metaphor for empathy...

Daizy Brandon 2008.06.13 - 03:20AM 5: Malfoy Manor Signed
Again pleased with the lovely imagery, the fish, the sunset, the peacock. Also pleased with the continued development in Severus's character. I really love how deeply you have delved into his thoughts thus far.

Author's Response: Well, Severus's mind is a most interesting to place to explore. I am glad you are enjoying it!

Muse22 2008.06.04 - 07:14PM 7: Tiger's Eye Signed
Will Contessa ever mutter the infamous words "Severus,please...."? ;)

Author's Response: :-D It's not *that* sort of fanfic! But I admit, it is still tempting...

Muse22 2008.06.04 - 04:08PM 7: Tiger's Eye Signed
This is the new author name. Loved this chapter. The Colligomens (sorry if it's misspelled) charm is brilliant. I look forward to seeing Severus' reaction to the funeral.

Author's Response: Praise be for Latin translation websites! One funeral coming right up...

snapesgirl21 2008.05.30 - 10:01AM 6: Thread of Hope Signed
Aw, Sevvie-poo is being nice to her! Glad to find out who her fiancee was. Can't wait to read more about these rings and their connection to the funeral.

Author's Response: LOL! Well, he *has* found something in common with her. But don't get too comfortable; he'll be nice to her only when it is in his interests to be so.

greenwood 2008.05.27 - 10:01PM 5: Malfoy Manor Signed
Well it looks like the next step has been completed; Severus is trusted by the DL. Now it will be interesting to see how the Headmastership falls to him. Looking forward to more.

Author's Response: Thank you. We have some way to go before he lands the Headmastership, so I hope you enjoy the ride.

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